for Blonding2/25/2019 c22 
3Number 2 Type C
Wow, this was an amazing read! You gave a story so exiting and i can't help but want more, but i respect your desicion of having this to be the end. Maybe in another "world" you kept it up, lol. So, thank you for such a fantastic fic, it was really fun to read!
3Number 2 Type CWow, this was an amazing read! You gave a story so exiting and i can't help but want more, but i respect your desicion of having this to be the end. Maybe in another "world" you kept it up, lol. So, thank you for such a fantastic fic, it was really fun to read!
2/24/2019 c22 14ChiakiAngel
Well I rather enjoyed sitting down to read this. I've never watched Boruto, but I have seen clips here and there on Youtube. I'm not a huge fan of Boruto, but from what I see in the clips and from what I've read, you've definitely got his personality down correctly.
I really enjoyed that it wasn't a different time, but rather a multiverse. Very interesting and something fun to play off of. I rather liked the story, so thank you for writing something that was so enthralling to read! :)
14ChiakiAngelWell I rather enjoyed sitting down to read this. I've never watched Boruto, but I have seen clips here and there on Youtube. I'm not a huge fan of Boruto, but from what I see in the clips and from what I've read, you've definitely got his personality down correctly.
I really enjoyed that it wasn't a different time, but rather a multiverse. Very interesting and something fun to play off of. I rather liked the story, so thank you for writing something that was so enthralling to read! :)
2/22/2019 c22 CandyBurst
This. Was. Incredible. The plot, characters, everything...it was all just so fun and engaging and wonderful to read! Thank you so much for writing this masterpiece.
This. Was. Incredible. The plot, characters, everything...it was all just so fun and engaging and wonderful to read! Thank you so much for writing this masterpiece.
1/17/2019 c1 Hm
Story gets so annoying at times
Story gets so annoying at times
1/17/2019 c1 No
There's way too much detail in your writing. Detail is great until it becomes overbearing. It made me stray away from the story a lot. Also the jumps from past to present, like Hinata giving birth is just a headache. Overall I didn't like it but I'll keep reading and see if it gets better. Plot is interesting.
There's way too much detail in your writing. Detail is great until it becomes overbearing. It made me stray away from the story a lot. Also the jumps from past to present, like Hinata giving birth is just a headache. Overall I didn't like it but I'll keep reading and see if it gets better. Plot is interesting.
1/6/2019 c22 Euangelion
First off, I want to begin to say that this story is likely one of the best, well-written naruto stories out there. I can't even begin to convey how many stories that revolve around Naruto that are written in such a putrid, self-gratifying and very amateurish fashion. Not to be mean or anything, because I'd be glad to give them some constructive criticism - even if they are children who most likely will take it to a grave offence. I'm going on a tangent, but I just want to get it through to you how fantastic, and complete (which is rare) your story is. It's very good in character interaction, and it makes it believable and completely unforced. It's smooth and languid and good at making the reader become completely absorbed. The similes used in the story, I thought, were very well executed. I haven't seen them around before, which adds a little uniqueness to your description. On that note, I wanted to see a little more description in your stories, but that is nitpicking. Your description currently is very enjoyable to read, and it's digestible, which makes for an easy reading experience. The character embodiment is lovely, as well. Also, I adored the emotional turmoil in each of the characters, they were like real people, with real thought processes, real emotions and real reactions. You didn't stray too much from the canon character framework, but also added a bit of pizazz. THE PLOT IS ALSO VERY CREATIVE I LOVED IT.
Overall, this is all just a big thumbs-up from me, I'll be staying tuned for more stories, and seeing your writing grow.
First off, I want to begin to say that this story is likely one of the best, well-written naruto stories out there. I can't even begin to convey how many stories that revolve around Naruto that are written in such a putrid, self-gratifying and very amateurish fashion. Not to be mean or anything, because I'd be glad to give them some constructive criticism - even if they are children who most likely will take it to a grave offence. I'm going on a tangent, but I just want to get it through to you how fantastic, and complete (which is rare) your story is. It's very good in character interaction, and it makes it believable and completely unforced. It's smooth and languid and good at making the reader become completely absorbed. The similes used in the story, I thought, were very well executed. I haven't seen them around before, which adds a little uniqueness to your description. On that note, I wanted to see a little more description in your stories, but that is nitpicking. Your description currently is very enjoyable to read, and it's digestible, which makes for an easy reading experience. The character embodiment is lovely, as well. Also, I adored the emotional turmoil in each of the characters, they were like real people, with real thought processes, real emotions and real reactions. You didn't stray too much from the canon character framework, but also added a bit of pizazz. THE PLOT IS ALSO VERY CREATIVE I LOVED IT.
Overall, this is all just a big thumbs-up from me, I'll be staying tuned for more stories, and seeing your writing grow.
11/24/2018 c1 Guest
Great read, thats all their is to it ;)
Great read, thats all their is to it ;)
11/19/2018 c22 kolroling
this was a awesome read! I just wonder how and where zetsu got the seed "umigakure" tree from? *spoiler alert* because shinju can't produce anymore sense kaguya ate the fruit.
this was a awesome read! I just wonder how and where zetsu got the seed "umigakure" tree from? *spoiler alert* because shinju can't produce anymore sense kaguya ate the fruit.
10/17/2018 c6 Iamnothere12
Goddamn this naruto is nerfed to hell even with his chakra is overloaded he still has massive physical and fast speed
Goddamn this naruto is nerfed to hell even with his chakra is overloaded he still has massive physical and fast speed
9/27/2018 c22 Lucifer
This is no doubt one of the best fictions i have ever read...
I finished reading it in just 2 days...
I was so much enjoying myself while reading it...
I really was drawn inside the story completely...
Amazing writing...
Please keep it up...
This is no doubt one of the best fictions i have ever read...
I finished reading it in just 2 days...
I was so much enjoying myself while reading it...
I really was drawn inside the story completely...
Amazing writing...
Please keep it up...
8/18/2018 c5 Arsenal
When fanfic writers write dumb Naruto, I get really mad because I think it's a waste of writing fanfic. Fanfic is to improve upon canon, not rehash canon. Please try and make a smarter Naruto.
When fanfic writers write dumb Naruto, I get really mad because I think it's a waste of writing fanfic. Fanfic is to improve upon canon, not rehash canon. Please try and make a smarter Naruto.