for HarryPotterA Mech Pilot? Oo12/31/2014 c6 kyle.hill.7965692
Ummmm since it's the middle of their school year wouldn't Dumbledore just have Harry stay with him in his office till the next year then sort him fresh?
Ummmm since it's the middle of their school year wouldn't Dumbledore just have Harry stay with him in his office till the next year then sort him fresh?
10/3/2005 c11 Sarah Riddle Potter
Wow! This is such an awesome story. I just love. Its been almost 2 years. Please please update so we can find out what happens next.
Wow! This is such an awesome story. I just love. Its been almost 2 years. Please please update so we can find out what happens next.
6/14/2004 c11 
4Jean-Claude Iscarot
It was a good story idea, but you don't have any writting talent whatsoever, and you don't know shit about anything related to MechWarrior. This story is an insult to both Harry Potter and to all MechWarriors.
SEJR
4Jean-Claude IscarotIt was a good story idea, but you don't have any writting talent whatsoever, and you don't know shit about anything related to MechWarrior. This story is an insult to both Harry Potter and to all MechWarriors.
SEJR
6/14/2004 c11 1Masta Chief 009
Heya guys, I was just thinking and wanted some feedback. How are you liking this so far? also, should I make the chapters longer, I know they have been rather short and I know I have no updated in a long time. any way Let me know so I can continue this. I have been rather down lately due to some problems I am going through, which have prevented me from writing any thing postable for quite some time now. some support from you guys would really be cool, thanks, Masta Chief 009 out
1Masta Chief 009Heya guys, I was just thinking and wanted some feedback. How are you liking this so far? also, should I make the chapters longer, I know they have been rather short and I know I have no updated in a long time. any way Let me know so I can continue this. I have been rather down lately due to some problems I am going through, which have prevented me from writing any thing postable for quite some time now. some support from you guys would really be cool, thanks, Masta Chief 009 out
12/6/2003 c11 Jigglypuff
The ending was very kawaii! Just the thought of a 20-years-old(and very muscular, heh) Harry making love to Hermione make me drool- Plz make Harry and Hermione end up in the Mech's dimenson and stay ther for 20 years before returning to his home domenson, plz? I love the story!
The ending was very kawaii! Just the thought of a 20-years-old(and very muscular, heh) Harry making love to Hermione make me drool- Plz make Harry and Hermione end up in the Mech's dimenson and stay ther for 20 years before returning to his home domenson, plz? I love the story!
12/5/2003 c10 Jigglypuff
How kawaii! When Mione-chan glomped Harry in the ending of chappie 10... how KAWAII! And don't forget that I wanna see more H/H fluff and the entire Slytherin Quidditch team humiliated publicly by the Weasley twins when Dungbombs begin making the poor boys smell like shit! That would be hiliarous and a lasting memory that would plague Marcu-baka and Draco-baka!
(baka=idiot in Japanese) (chan=cute)(kawaii=cute)
A certain fan of your work
How kawaii! When Mione-chan glomped Harry in the ending of chappie 10... how KAWAII! And don't forget that I wanna see more H/H fluff and the entire Slytherin Quidditch team humiliated publicly by the Weasley twins when Dungbombs begin making the poor boys smell like shit! That would be hiliarous and a lasting memory that would plague Marcu-baka and Draco-baka!
(baka=idiot in Japanese) (chan=cute)(kawaii=cute)
A certain fan of your work
9/2/2003 c10 paladin3030
here's an idea after that failed attack on Hogwarts the Deatheaters try to figure out where that machine came from & how to stop it. After fooling around with Time & Space Magic they find the era that Harry came from. Enter the Clans the DE's also find out that this era is in fact there future for the Clans also have Wizards & Witch's.
Think of this as a way bring the Dragoons in to help one of there own.
here's an idea after that failed attack on Hogwarts the Deatheaters try to figure out where that machine came from & how to stop it. After fooling around with Time & Space Magic they find the era that Harry came from. Enter the Clans the DE's also find out that this era is in fact there future for the Clans also have Wizards & Witch's.
Think of this as a way bring the Dragoons in to help one of there own.
9/1/2003 c10 Lilyanatos
Hey man so cute. I love it.
You know who this is from
Love
u know who ::leaves a rose behind and a card sealed with a kiss::
Hey man so cute. I love it.
You know who this is from
Love
u know who ::leaves a rose behind and a card sealed with a kiss::
7/25/2003 c9 Lilyanatos
Man i love it so far where is the next chapter.
Sony
Man i love it so far where is the next chapter.
Sony
5/2/2003 c9 63Ms. Videl Son
You've done very well with following the plot/story of the first book, as well as incorporating your Mech stuff into it. However, some of your grammar could STILL use some work (though it IS quite a bit better). For instance, any number below 100 you're supposed to spell out (ex. instead of 1 it's one, 2 is two, etc.) and punctuation could use some work, too. Most of it, I think, is merely overlooked while writing...try going over it after saving it, say an hour or two later, maybe even a day, and fixing your grammar. Or, the offer still stands to let ME do it for you...I can't help it, I love to show off ^_^.
Love you, Stephie-chan!
~*Mary-chan*~
63Ms. Videl SonYou've done very well with following the plot/story of the first book, as well as incorporating your Mech stuff into it. However, some of your grammar could STILL use some work (though it IS quite a bit better). For instance, any number below 100 you're supposed to spell out (ex. instead of 1 it's one, 2 is two, etc.) and punctuation could use some work, too. Most of it, I think, is merely overlooked while writing...try going over it after saving it, say an hour or two later, maybe even a day, and fixing your grammar. Or, the offer still stands to let ME do it for you...I can't help it, I love to show off ^_^.
Love you, Stephie-chan!
~*Mary-chan*~
3/20/2003 c1 1BlackDragon11
Hay sorry but I finally finished reading your story I was kind of tied up but this great I have told some of my friends to read this and I like the Bio ::Cracks knuckles:: 8-] just kidding but thanks for telling about this and I also got my story for others to read. but mine doesn't even come close to this great job man
1BlackDragon11Hay sorry but I finally finished reading your story I was kind of tied up but this great I have told some of my friends to read this and I like the Bio ::Cracks knuckles:: 8-] just kidding but thanks for telling about this and I also got my story for others to read. but mine doesn't even come close to this great job man
3/2/2003 c6 yay i dont have to login cracy chick named pan
Screaming poo flying pigs thats so sweet of hermione or whatever her name is - doesnt know crap about harry potter- Keep up the good work Steph!
Screaming poo flying pigs thats so sweet of hermione or whatever her name is - doesnt know crap about harry potter- Keep up the good work Steph!