for She's A Little Troubled, A Little Dysfunctional She's A Survivor6/11/2017 c18 Serenage13
Please update soon I am dying in anticipation!
Please update soon I am dying in anticipation!
5/22/2017 c18 Alex
Holy crow, this is beautiful!
Holy crow, this is beautiful!
5/22/2017 c18 Unknown user
Please give me tips on how to defeat Kukui's really strong pokemon.
Please give me tips on how to defeat Kukui's really strong pokemon.
5/17/2017 c18 
3LuaKitsune
Ezra and Luke met each other XD
Can't wait to see more and see if something will happen between those two
3LuaKitsuneEzra and Luke met each other XD
Can't wait to see more and see if something will happen between those two
5/17/2017 c18 1eye of sparta
amazing
cant wait for the next chapter.
Q are you going for a one off of luke or a more intermittent multiple meetings or a possible romance?
1eye of spartaamazing
cant wait for the next chapter.
Q are you going for a one off of luke or a more intermittent multiple meetings or a possible romance?
5/8/2017 c17 1lolistarkiller
I'm really liking this and I can understand why she keeps things close to her chest but you do need to start allowing her to trust a bit more in the crew. you've flushed a more complete street kid character than the show did, but she is still a kid so you should allow her to start letting her walls down a bit more but other than that I like her snark! I hope you update again soon because this is truly a great fanfic!
1lolistarkillerI'm really liking this and I can understand why she keeps things close to her chest but you do need to start allowing her to trust a bit more in the crew. you've flushed a more complete street kid character than the show did, but she is still a kid so you should allow her to start letting her walls down a bit more but other than that I like her snark! I hope you update again soon because this is truly a great fanfic!
4/20/2017 c11 1Historian1912
If you'd like thoughts, here's one. Stop making it obvious that Ezra should be dead in a ditch somewhere. Ezra seems to lack social skills that she should have just by being alive. Having not died or been explicitly enslaved, supposedly Ezra knows what's worth fighting over and what isn't, but she sure as heck isn't showing that here. I can see no reason for Ezra being secretive about everything. Tip to surprisingly stupid street urchin: the more you try to hide things the more people are going to want to know about them. Pick what's legitimately worth hiding (certain things about her past would qualify, not that that would be a healthy choice) and which isn't (being nice to some kids is not even remotely secret-worthy, being on a small scale what the whole Ghost crew is already doing).
I like this story. I really do like it. I just really can't stand seeing Ezra self-sabotaging herself for reasons I can neither understand nor identify with. Living in an area where pissing people off could get her hurt or killed, you'd think Ezra would have learned the art of placating people or at least not drawing their ire. Yet she seems to love making people angry at her for no good reason. This is especially odd since it would be more logical for her to initially go overboard in trying to ingratiate herself to Kanan and Hera before pushing the boundaries to see exactly where those are (assuming she'd even want to do that). She's safer than she's ever been, not having actively worry about where food's going to come from that day (though I don't expect her to stop worrying about that for a while), and has people that she's slowly starting to realize care about her. Why exactly is she trying to ruin that for herself?
1Historian1912If you'd like thoughts, here's one. Stop making it obvious that Ezra should be dead in a ditch somewhere. Ezra seems to lack social skills that she should have just by being alive. Having not died or been explicitly enslaved, supposedly Ezra knows what's worth fighting over and what isn't, but she sure as heck isn't showing that here. I can see no reason for Ezra being secretive about everything. Tip to surprisingly stupid street urchin: the more you try to hide things the more people are going to want to know about them. Pick what's legitimately worth hiding (certain things about her past would qualify, not that that would be a healthy choice) and which isn't (being nice to some kids is not even remotely secret-worthy, being on a small scale what the whole Ghost crew is already doing).
I like this story. I really do like it. I just really can't stand seeing Ezra self-sabotaging herself for reasons I can neither understand nor identify with. Living in an area where pissing people off could get her hurt or killed, you'd think Ezra would have learned the art of placating people or at least not drawing their ire. Yet she seems to love making people angry at her for no good reason. This is especially odd since it would be more logical for her to initially go overboard in trying to ingratiate herself to Kanan and Hera before pushing the boundaries to see exactly where those are (assuming she'd even want to do that). She's safer than she's ever been, not having actively worry about where food's going to come from that day (though I don't expect her to stop worrying about that for a while), and has people that she's slowly starting to realize care about her. Why exactly is she trying to ruin that for herself?
4/20/2017 c5 Historian1912
I've enjoyed this, for the most part, so far. Ezra is somewhat annoying, if understandably so. Ezra's vision concerning the droids was strange; canon Ezra doesn't have those visions. On a technical note, I've noticed a number of minor spelling and punctuation errors, but they aren't a major problem. What causes confusion, however are the several times you've had two people speaking in the same paragraph. Never do that. Always create new paragraph when the person speaking changes, even if that person has only one line.
I've enjoyed this, for the most part, so far. Ezra is somewhat annoying, if understandably so. Ezra's vision concerning the droids was strange; canon Ezra doesn't have those visions. On a technical note, I've noticed a number of minor spelling and punctuation errors, but they aren't a major problem. What causes confusion, however are the several times you've had two people speaking in the same paragraph. Never do that. Always create new paragraph when the person speaking changes, even if that person has only one line.
4/19/2017 c17 1eye of sparta
Amazing please continue.
im glad someone's actually doing a proper story still it seems like it's all turning into one shots.
Will you have a meeting with obiwan or maul soon or later on?
1eye of spartaAmazing please continue.
im glad someone's actually doing a proper story still it seems like it's all turning into one shots.
Will you have a meeting with obiwan or maul soon or later on?
4/18/2017 c17 Unknown user
Where are the next chapters?
Where are the next chapters?
12/18/2016 c16 ivystar
What are you going to do for Tatooine? Are you going to have them meet Luke or Obi Wan?
What are you going to do for Tatooine? Are you going to have them meet Luke or Obi Wan?