for Norns' Warrior - Reward9/23/2016 c1 lunaskyup
of course odin and thor never loved you. They loved you as long as you were useful to them. And maybe frigga loved you for real but she turned a doormat in front of odin's wishes.
of course odin and thor never loved you. They loved you as long as you were useful to them. And maybe frigga loved you for real but she turned a doormat in front of odin's wishes.
7/9/2016 c1 Bhavie
Update pls
Update pls
9/25/2015 c1 Vidgealz C Valvatore
Please don't tell me that this is the only chapter.
This is too awesome to be one chapter.
Please don't tell me that this is the only chapter.
This is too awesome to be one chapter.
9/25/2015 c1 
1pallyndrome
I think you're very right to blame frigga as much as odin for loki's mistreatment. great story :)
1pallyndromeI think you're very right to blame frigga as much as odin for loki's mistreatment. great story :)
9/25/2015 c1 1Amarie of Mirkwood
An unusual story but I like it very much, can't wait to see where you go with this!
1Amarie of MirkwoodAn unusual story but I like it very much, can't wait to see where you go with this!
9/24/2015 c1 9anastacianott
Oh... I say very good written. Interesting start when the deed is already done - nice.
I see you used mythological Loki with his children and all. Honestly, when I thought of a possible sequel I was more into MCU Loki but yours is nice as well.
(And I think I'd have added Thor's POV and Avengers... But it's not important).
The only minus I find in Loki's portrayal here is how he says he is sorry - don't get me wrong, Its a perfect Loki, but I mostly think that Loki wouldn't have been sorry for Midgard. He is more like having a reason to do what he did and forget about it like a nightmare (and what he had gone through with Thanos somehow equal what he unwillingly did to mortals but - it was needed. And besides he undergone punishment because of it).
Frigga left in me very bad feelings. I of course know how her portrayal in movies is all holy, but personally I don't like her. I think she is as much lying and manipulative monster like her husband and all her words about how she and Odin always love Loki and never want to hurt him (but they DO and with violence for their own benefit) is just showing her mask. She continues to have Loki's trust and uses it , staying loyal though only to Odin.
Eh. Yeah, I think I would be more in childless mocking everyone Loki , and Thor and the Avengers to watch god of mischief do their work, but it's not my story so I shut up.
I think you did great! And thank you, thephoenixandthedragon4ever for your work!
9anastacianottOh... I say very good written. Interesting start when the deed is already done - nice.
I see you used mythological Loki with his children and all. Honestly, when I thought of a possible sequel I was more into MCU Loki but yours is nice as well.
(And I think I'd have added Thor's POV and Avengers... But it's not important).
The only minus I find in Loki's portrayal here is how he says he is sorry - don't get me wrong, Its a perfect Loki, but I mostly think that Loki wouldn't have been sorry for Midgard. He is more like having a reason to do what he did and forget about it like a nightmare (and what he had gone through with Thanos somehow equal what he unwillingly did to mortals but - it was needed. And besides he undergone punishment because of it).
Frigga left in me very bad feelings. I of course know how her portrayal in movies is all holy, but personally I don't like her. I think she is as much lying and manipulative monster like her husband and all her words about how she and Odin always love Loki and never want to hurt him (but they DO and with violence for their own benefit) is just showing her mask. She continues to have Loki's trust and uses it , staying loyal though only to Odin.
Eh. Yeah, I think I would be more in childless mocking everyone Loki , and Thor and the Avengers to watch god of mischief do their work, but it's not my story so I shut up.
I think you did great! And thank you, thephoenixandthedragon4ever for your work!
9/24/2015 c1 19Sumi-Sprite
Um, I'm a bit confused. This seems to be the same as your 'Norns' Champion' ficlet? Or am I missing something?
19Sumi-SpriteUm, I'm a bit confused. This seems to be the same as your 'Norns' Champion' ficlet? Or am I missing something?