for Bits and Pieces12/10/2015 c8 Jules
That last chapter I loved. I think a story can evolve.
That last chapter I loved. I think a story can evolve.
12/10/2015 c8 
4not paranoid enough
I think this story feels a little odd because it seems to switch tacks partway through. It's starts as a what if and then ends up basically right where the show was. The beginning was wonderfully different, but the end felt same-ish.
But I loved the beginning and like your take on that relationship and would've liked to see that developed! Also, anything with Tommy is fabulous :D
Good luck with finals!
4not paranoid enoughI think this story feels a little odd because it seems to switch tacks partway through. It's starts as a what if and then ends up basically right where the show was. The beginning was wonderfully different, but the end felt same-ish.
But I loved the beginning and like your take on that relationship and would've liked to see that developed! Also, anything with Tommy is fabulous :D
Good luck with finals!
12/10/2015 c8 3flying-green-monkey
I enjoyed this piece and really liked the idea of Tommy and Felicity becoming friends after Oliver's disappearance/death. Perhaps it'd be interesting to write a story/chapter set in the future after the undertaking, how Tommy's death would affect Felicity and Oliver's relationship?
To be hones (doesnt that sound foreboding, but i swear its not, and i thought id add it since you mentioned not being sure about this piece), the story seems to follow the general story line of the show so i think maybe after this point (if you continued to follow the general established plot) it might be hard to put an original alternative universe sort of spin on things without pointing things in a new drastic direction. Does that make sense? If it doesnt, just ignore me and keep writing. I have consistently enjoyed your writing, it always provides an exciting distraction from study.
3flying-green-monkeyI enjoyed this piece and really liked the idea of Tommy and Felicity becoming friends after Oliver's disappearance/death. Perhaps it'd be interesting to write a story/chapter set in the future after the undertaking, how Tommy's death would affect Felicity and Oliver's relationship?
To be hones (doesnt that sound foreboding, but i swear its not, and i thought id add it since you mentioned not being sure about this piece), the story seems to follow the general story line of the show so i think maybe after this point (if you continued to follow the general established plot) it might be hard to put an original alternative universe sort of spin on things without pointing things in a new drastic direction. Does that make sense? If it doesnt, just ignore me and keep writing. I have consistently enjoyed your writing, it always provides an exciting distraction from study.
12/10/2015 c8 12Slightly Sassy
Every time I see that you uploaded I get so excited! I've said it before, and I'll say it again, but you are definitely one of (possibly my top) favourite fanfiction author. Even if you weren't completely happy with this fic I can promise you that its really good. A different take on the "Oliver knew Felicity before the Gambit" that I really liked. It was awesome :)
12Slightly SassyEvery time I see that you uploaded I get so excited! I've said it before, and I'll say it again, but you are definitely one of (possibly my top) favourite fanfiction author. Even if you weren't completely happy with this fic I can promise you that its really good. A different take on the "Oliver knew Felicity before the Gambit" that I really liked. It was awesome :)
12/10/2015 c8 27ChiefPam
I like it... I liked the contrast Felicity sees between pre- and post-island Oliver, and that they were friends... and I'm guessing she's going to want to know a little bit more about the hood guy. And I'd like to see Oliver's side of it, actually - he has to hide with everyone but he has a person who he can actually trust. If he chooses to. I'm guessing he's not going to want to say much. I don't need another first season rewrite, but a bit more of this universe would be interesting.
Then again, I find pretty much all your stuff interesting :)
27ChiefPamI like it... I liked the contrast Felicity sees between pre- and post-island Oliver, and that they were friends... and I'm guessing she's going to want to know a little bit more about the hood guy. And I'd like to see Oliver's side of it, actually - he has to hide with everyone but he has a person who he can actually trust. If he chooses to. I'm guessing he's not going to want to say much. I don't need another first season rewrite, but a bit more of this universe would be interesting.
Then again, I find pretty much all your stuff interesting :)
12/6/2015 c7 Lightly Salted P
So I got caught up on my Finder and now I really want a whole FanFiction about felicity being the finder that would be amazing and I can't stop thinking about it. Just a suggestion and plea. Loved the story.
Sorry I'm not logged in but yours truly,
Lightly Satled Pringles
So I got caught up on my Finder and now I really want a whole FanFiction about felicity being the finder that would be amazing and I can't stop thinking about it. Just a suggestion and plea. Loved the story.
Sorry I'm not logged in but yours truly,
Lightly Satled Pringles
12/4/2015 c7 Sunnylt
Hi, you've written in AN that you clearly had a problem. It seems I got another problem: I just finished the 1st season of DTB and am now in the middle of "The Finder" :) Nothing to add here...
Are you ok? It's been two Thursdays without another addition for us to enjoy, and you usually give the heads about a longer pause. Anyway, I hope you are fine.
Thanks for sharing your work!
Hi, you've written in AN that you clearly had a problem. It seems I got another problem: I just finished the 1st season of DTB and am now in the middle of "The Finder" :) Nothing to add here...
Are you ok? It's been two Thursdays without another addition for us to enjoy, and you usually give the heads about a longer pause. Anyway, I hope you are fine.
Thanks for sharing your work!
12/3/2015 c6 1Lady Eagle
This is very intriguing...would love to know more about this world as there were a few things unanswered. I guess that means I should watch the anime version. Although I doubt I'd love the characters as much as these ones!
1Lady EagleThis is very intriguing...would love to know more about this world as there were a few things unanswered. I guess that means I should watch the anime version. Although I doubt I'd love the characters as much as these ones!
12/2/2015 c7 belcheto
Chapter 7 is my favorite...OMG I grinned through the whole thing! I pray inspiration finds you and you write more in this universe!
Chapter 7 is my favorite...OMG I grinned through the whole thing! I pray inspiration finds you and you write more in this universe!
11/29/2015 c7 Guest
Thanks for another chapter! I love these au's and you are hands down one of the best at the olicity au. Forgive me, I can't remember the universe, but the one you have where Oliver can read minds? Any chance of doing another past the 2 you've done with something involving felicity in trouble and Oliver using his ability to save her? I just love that au idea for some reason and there's something about playing with the possibility of Oliver being more intuned to Felicity's mind cuz he's around her more or something... like Felicity in trouble and her warning him from a distance? Anyway, regardless thank you thank you for your stories!
Thanks for another chapter! I love these au's and you are hands down one of the best at the olicity au. Forgive me, I can't remember the universe, but the one you have where Oliver can read minds? Any chance of doing another past the 2 you've done with something involving felicity in trouble and Oliver using his ability to save her? I just love that au idea for some reason and there's something about playing with the possibility of Oliver being more intuned to Felicity's mind cuz he's around her more or something... like Felicity in trouble and her warning him from a distance? Anyway, regardless thank you thank you for your stories!
11/23/2015 c7 19Dairi
Ha! Aww, that was sweet and pretty interesting. Look forward to reading more in this verse if you decide to write & post more of it. Interesting storyline too, can't wait to find out what did happen to Walter this time, and then of course all the things Felicity & co would get into along the way. ;)
19DairiHa! Aww, that was sweet and pretty interesting. Look forward to reading more in this verse if you decide to write & post more of it. Interesting storyline too, can't wait to find out what did happen to Walter this time, and then of course all the things Felicity & co would get into along the way. ;)
11/20/2015 c7 1Lady Eagle
Wow. I adored this 'verse. The painted target was hilarious! I'm glad Dig looks out for her though. Sounds like she needs someone like that and he fits the bill perfectly.
1Lady EagleWow. I adored this 'verse. The painted target was hilarious! I'm glad Dig looks out for her though. Sounds like she needs someone like that and he fits the bill perfectly.