for Naruto and Sakura at Ichiraku's5/3/2022 c4 taiwoeretan1
I love how you're giving Sakura's emotions personalities reminds me of Raven from TT
I love how you're giving Sakura's emotions personalities reminds me of Raven from TT
8/8/2017 c5 Anonymous Person
Man, I hope Kurama and Ino never meet. Especially since it appears that Kurama actually remembers gossip of all things.
Man, I hope Kurama and Ino never meet. Especially since it appears that Kurama actually remembers gossip of all things.
8/8/2017 c4 Anonymous Person
You have no idea how weird it is to read about a still somewhat malevolent Kyuubi giving love advice of all things.
You have no idea how weird it is to read about a still somewhat malevolent Kyuubi giving love advice of all things.
9/30/2016 c15 
24thedarkpokemaster
LOL Naruto and his dreams oh boy so funny and a laugh I needed as well.
24thedarkpokemasterLOL Naruto and his dreams oh boy so funny and a laugh I needed as well.
6/8/2016 c16 thedarkpokemaster
Damn been a while but some sweet and gooc chapters, just wished I had read them sooner but been ill and been at doctors a lot.
Damn been a while but some sweet and gooc chapters, just wished I had read them sooner but been ill and been at doctors a lot.
4/22/2016 c16 22Shinobi Gatana
HOLY CRAP. THIS IS NOT FAIR AT ALL. DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THE TWIST MESSED WITH MY HEAD. YOU CAN'T 'NOT' WRITE A CONTINUED STORY FOLLOWING THIS PLOT. IT'S WRONG, AND EVIL AND JUST NOT RIGHT. NOOOOOOOO! MUST HAVE A CONTINUED STORY UPON THIS STORYLINE. THAT SAID... I AM STILL SUPER HAPPY WITH THE ORIGINAL ONE AS WELL. SO CRUEL!
22Shinobi GatanaHOLY CRAP. THIS IS NOT FAIR AT ALL. DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THE TWIST MESSED WITH MY HEAD. YOU CAN'T 'NOT' WRITE A CONTINUED STORY FOLLOWING THIS PLOT. IT'S WRONG, AND EVIL AND JUST NOT RIGHT. NOOOOOOOO! MUST HAVE A CONTINUED STORY UPON THIS STORYLINE. THAT SAID... I AM STILL SUPER HAPPY WITH THE ORIGINAL ONE AS WELL. SO CRUEL!
4/21/2016 c16 1kitsuneswiftpaw
Wow. That really was darker than the original. I kinda like it tho, quite realistic.
1kitsuneswiftpawWow. That really was darker than the original. I kinda like it tho, quite realistic.
3/21/2016 c4 30fanofthisfiction
A lot of personalities were going on inside of Sakura's mind but all played out well and had their own moment to shine. Something tells me Inner Sakura and the Fox would make for scary advisors, so the overall innocent way this played out was appreciated! Thanks for sharing!
30fanofthisfictionA lot of personalities were going on inside of Sakura's mind but all played out well and had their own moment to shine. Something tells me Inner Sakura and the Fox would make for scary advisors, so the overall innocent way this played out was appreciated! Thanks for sharing!
3/21/2016 c3 fanofthisfiction
The opportunity to share another review chanced upon me, so here I am.
This one had a nice sweetness to it, although I admit it could easily be followed up by a story about Temari's own sweetheart (Shikamaru).
Denial is sweet so long as you know in the end it was just to cover something that was a little embarrassing and there was hope for it to happen. I'm glad you settled on the ending you did. It was as if Sakura hasn't realized what she did but gleaned the benefits of it.
The opportunity to share another review chanced upon me, so here I am.
This one had a nice sweetness to it, although I admit it could easily be followed up by a story about Temari's own sweetheart (Shikamaru).
Denial is sweet so long as you know in the end it was just to cover something that was a little embarrassing and there was hope for it to happen. I'm glad you settled on the ending you did. It was as if Sakura hasn't realized what she did but gleaned the benefits of it.