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5/6/2020 c2 Kyotokiki
That's cute
I'm still trying to figure out who the hell luffy's soulmate is
Like, the only "yellow" characters are kizaru, sanji, and law, and law makes the most sense but also ?! Idfk?!
8/28/2017 c2 4Rainbow D. Jay
Yay! Hmm, now that you mention it... Vivi and Wyper isn't actually that bad of a ship. I really really want to know who the yellow person is! Is it a boy or girl? Pirate? Marine? Civillian? I- want- to- KNOOOW!
8/28/2017 c1 Rainbow D. Jay
OOh! I never ship Nami with anybody... but... Usopp and her really work! And... yellow. Yellow. Anything to do with smiley faces, perhaps?
3/1/2017 c2 5Everlight18
I'm really glad you've continued this! Vivi/Wyper is a really rare pairing, but I can see the possibilities there. Hope you continue with the other Straw Hat's too!

Well put together, and I love all the different soul-links in the story! Looking forward to more!

And, yes, I'll get that story finished up sometime soon. Maybe. Hopefully?
9/26/2015 c1 27LeafyxThiefy
This was cute, just the right mix of angst and well it wasn't exactly fluff, but relief and happiness that they found eachother after all that, oh the word I'm looking for is Comfort. I can't help but wonder who is Zoro's soulmate is though, I would have thought ZoSan but unless Sanji is unwilling to tell then maybe Tashigi? As for Luffy please tell it its Law XD who else does Yellow? but back to Nami and Usopp I think that if you were to expand it to a second chapter you can focus more on the romance, I noticed you wanted to work on romance but this chapter was more meeting based which isnt bad because its the starting block but didn't deal with alot of romance I think, have them spend more time together in future chapters after all the initial soulmates have been united? or in between while they go in adventures and stuff.

Overall you did an amazing job, I love the idea that all these different methods exist, is there a set of categories though or just those main four? Also I wasn't too clear on Luffy's is he blind to the color yellow? can he see the color of his hat then o.o

Thanks for sharing though keep it up, cant wait to see what else you can come up with. Have a great day
9/26/2015 c1 21emygrl99
I still totally love this idea, I can't believe I haven't found more fics about all the AUs smashed together. I already told you what I like about it but I still think it's funny how Usopp and Nami didn't even realize at first that they were each other's soul mates :p I didn't realize (/remember if you told me xD) that you've never written romance before, cause it's very well written actually (: I can't wait for the next chapter!
9/25/2015 c1 FTOPBMEEfanatic
Woah, i thought you didn't do pairings? Nevermind, i'm glad you gave it a shot! It's super good! you were just hiding all this wonderfulness and you didn't know it!

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