for Lord of Time6/18/2024 c107 Guest
good story
good story
5/16/2024 c107 Anatasia Calista
I love this story so I have been checking if you post any new chapters, unless I was too busy. I'm glad that you are able to finish.
If you want to challenge yourself on the trilogies:
- Book 2: Harry and Tom travel to different worlds. The worlds even though similar but also different. They should have new ways to resolve that world's dilema. I know that this will be difficult since you will have create multiple versions.
- Book 3: Harry and Tom come back to their original world to Harry's timeline. Maybe some thing new pop up? New enemies?
I love this story so I have been checking if you post any new chapters, unless I was too busy. I'm glad that you are able to finish.
If you want to challenge yourself on the trilogies:
- Book 2: Harry and Tom travel to different worlds. The worlds even though similar but also different. They should have new ways to resolve that world's dilema. I know that this will be difficult since you will have create multiple versions.
- Book 3: Harry and Tom come back to their original world to Harry's timeline. Maybe some thing new pop up? New enemies?
4/24/2024 c107 Blank0897
That was incredible!
i absolutely loved it!
I would love anything you write, literally
That was incredible!
i absolutely loved it!
I would love anything you write, literally
4/6/2024 c107 
1TranoMoon
It's definitely sad to see this story's end, but it had to come eventually. This story has been amazing, and I would certainly be interested in seeing more of when Tom was running for election, the return to Harry's time, and maybe even seeing what Hadrian and Tom get up to after their departure. I hope you have a good day, and thank you for this story.
1TranoMoonIt's definitely sad to see this story's end, but it had to come eventually. This story has been amazing, and I would certainly be interested in seeing more of when Tom was running for election, the return to Harry's time, and maybe even seeing what Hadrian and Tom get up to after their departure. I hope you have a good day, and thank you for this story.
4/3/2024 c51 9WyrdSmith
Re-reading this for the gazillionth time. Still awesome. I only this time around noted a small continuity error. In the fic, Dumbledore doesn’t have a phoenix yet; however, in the pensieve review of the graveyard magical cage, Hadrian says that it’s created because both he and Tom have wands with feathers from Dumbledore’s Phoenix. Let’s just presume that one of the Ollivanders met Fawkes before Dumbledore did.
9WyrdSmithRe-reading this for the gazillionth time. Still awesome. I only this time around noted a small continuity error. In the fic, Dumbledore doesn’t have a phoenix yet; however, in the pensieve review of the graveyard magical cage, Hadrian says that it’s created because both he and Tom have wands with feathers from Dumbledore’s Phoenix. Let’s just presume that one of the Ollivanders met Fawkes before Dumbledore did.
2/29/2024 c99 NathanPeverell
minor correction on the baptism thing, the original sin inherited from the parents that is washed away doesn't have anything to do with sex at all, it is the 'original' sin, the eating of the fruit from the tree of knowledge. Which, yeah, bit insulting really, though fitting really, if you think of it in terms of religious indoctrination; starting out by washing away the tain of knowledge
minor correction on the baptism thing, the original sin inherited from the parents that is washed away doesn't have anything to do with sex at all, it is the 'original' sin, the eating of the fruit from the tree of knowledge. Which, yeah, bit insulting really, though fitting really, if you think of it in terms of religious indoctrination; starting out by washing away the tain of knowledge
2/29/2024 c87 NathanPeverell
In the future, if you're looking for a mention of a specific name, most writing programs have a search featurethat said, reading through the story one is writing is often a good thing anyway, so it might have been time well spent
In the future, if you're looking for a mention of a specific name, most writing programs have a search featurethat said, reading through the story one is writing is often a good thing anyway, so it might have been time well spent
2/29/2024 c18 maiqsmail
"Cousins N times removed" means from different generations. 10 times removed would place them about 2-3 centuries apart. You're looking for "tenth cousin" or something.
"Cousins N times removed" means from different generations. 10 times removed would place them about 2-3 centuries apart. You're looking for "tenth cousin" or something.
2/28/2024 c67 NathanPeverell
speaking as a pagan, i think you did the ritual beautifully. A wonderful take on a public ritual
speaking as a pagan, i think you did the ritual beautifully. A wonderful take on a public ritual
2/28/2024 c1 maiqsmail
You dumb fucking cunt. I just read a dozen chapters again vaguely remembering some parts and then I reached a point where it was clear why I dropped this in the first place. It's fucking slash TMR/HP with homoerotic smut. And I scrolled through the reviews and that was the reason I dropped it more than half a year ago. Put a fucking warning anywhere. I wish ffn would let me mark fanfics as dropped so I wouldn't end up here again in a few years.
You dumb fucking cunt. I just read a dozen chapters again vaguely remembering some parts and then I reached a point where it was clear why I dropped this in the first place. It's fucking slash TMR/HP with homoerotic smut. And I scrolled through the reviews and that was the reason I dropped it more than half a year ago. Put a fucking warning anywhere. I wish ffn would let me mark fanfics as dropped so I wouldn't end up here again in a few years.
1/31/2024 c1 acowles02
I havent read the story, but who tf is the author referring to as the master of death? Riddle? Literally impossible for that one. Some randon unknown? Also impossible since in the 1940s grindewald had the wand, and we know he didnt have the other two or dumbled would have had all three.
I havent read the story, but who tf is the author referring to as the master of death? Riddle? Literally impossible for that one. Some randon unknown? Also impossible since in the 1940s grindewald had the wand, and we know he didnt have the other two or dumbled would have had all three.
1/29/2024 c71 2MyAlternatePersona
Love the story so far. Although i feel it would be great if you marked fhe starting and ending of lemon scenes. I have nothing against homosexuality but its not for me and i dont prefer reading it. I skim through fearing I'll miss something of interest to the plot so if you could add the warnings then it'd be great! great job btw
2MyAlternatePersonaLove the story so far. Although i feel it would be great if you marked fhe starting and ending of lemon scenes. I have nothing against homosexuality but its not for me and i dont prefer reading it. I skim through fearing I'll miss something of interest to the plot so if you could add the warnings then it'd be great! great job btw
1/25/2024 c107 SunPho3n1x
I love this story! I love the bond between Tom and Harry, and that he has changed Tom, although not completely. Thank you for writing this!
I love this story! I love the bond between Tom and Harry, and that he has changed Tom, although not completely. Thank you for writing this!