for Lord of Time1/25/2024 c107 SunPho3n1x
I love this story! I love the bond between Tom and Harry, and that he has changed Tom, although not completely. Thank you for writing this!
I love this story! I love the bond between Tom and Harry, and that he has changed Tom, although not completely. Thank you for writing this!
12/19/2023 c107 
1Darthedreus Bolt
I would love to see these different scenes. I really enjoyed this story.
1Darthedreus BoltI would love to see these different scenes. I really enjoyed this story.
12/16/2023 c107 redlaikareads
I really liked this story, time skip and all. I do feel like Dumbledore was an unfinished plot. thank you for this
I really liked this story, time skip and all. I do feel like Dumbledore was an unfinished plot. thank you for this
12/10/2023 c107 Hariana Halone
Honestly, the story is great as it is, not really interested in seeing Tom eliminated from baby loll, but with this ending, there are soooooooo many possibilities, Tom and Harry could visit a lot of countries, not just to fix everything, I imagine them in Marvel, making a planet habitable for mutants, and doing what Xavier never could do, or conquering Sakaar and making Tom a king loll, going to Game of Thrones and making the North a power or having his own kingdom. Go on vacation in TWD, make a big community...ect, gfyfthblbigddhok'p so many possibilities
Honestly, the story is great as it is, not really interested in seeing Tom eliminated from baby loll, but with this ending, there are soooooooo many possibilities, Tom and Harry could visit a lot of countries, not just to fix everything, I imagine them in Marvel, making a planet habitable for mutants, and doing what Xavier never could do, or conquering Sakaar and making Tom a king loll, going to Game of Thrones and making the North a power or having his own kingdom. Go on vacation in TWD, make a big community...ect, gfyfthblbigddhok'p so many possibilities
11/27/2023 c1 17DragonShifter
Its not a bad story, though it seems a little discombobulating. It seems to jump around just a little to much and it feels a little choppy due to poor editing in sone spots and like you had a lot of ideas and you were going to fast to fit them all in. I also feel like you had trouble keeping track of the timeline, events, and people in some spots.
Its not the worst story, but not one of your best. I feel like you could expand upon your idea a little more throughout of the story, have someone proof read your story to help it make a little more sense, amd maybe slow down and maybe think through how you are going set up each part of the story. I only suggest this because i am currently writing a fan fic too and got a little to excited in writing it amd had it pointed out to me that my story seemed…. A bit jumbled
17DragonShifterIts not a bad story, though it seems a little discombobulating. It seems to jump around just a little to much and it feels a little choppy due to poor editing in sone spots and like you had a lot of ideas and you were going to fast to fit them all in. I also feel like you had trouble keeping track of the timeline, events, and people in some spots.
Its not the worst story, but not one of your best. I feel like you could expand upon your idea a little more throughout of the story, have someone proof read your story to help it make a little more sense, amd maybe slow down and maybe think through how you are going set up each part of the story. I only suggest this because i am currently writing a fan fic too and got a little to excited in writing it amd had it pointed out to me that my story seemed…. A bit jumbled
11/26/2023 c107 Angelic Abomination
This story has to be one of my top five fanfics. I have reread it so many times and I love how you write the characters.
Am sad that this has looking forward to what you do next.
This story has to be one of my top five fanfics. I have reread it so many times and I love how you write the characters.
Am sad that this has looking forward to what you do next.
11/19/2023 c96 roxannemorgan
Probably this has been answered, but on the rare offchance that it hasn't - in Britain, the general public don't elect a Prime Minister. They elect a party, e.g. when a General Election is held, the party that gets the most votes forms the government. The party elect one of them as Prime Minister.
Granted, one generally knows which MP a party wants to be their leader when the election is held, but it can still chance without rhyme or reason, or change of government. Example: Rishi Sunak (2023).
You know this by now, I guess, but these are good stories. As a reader, I'd like to think I can make a tiny repayment.
Probably this has been answered, but on the rare offchance that it hasn't - in Britain, the general public don't elect a Prime Minister. They elect a party, e.g. when a General Election is held, the party that gets the most votes forms the government. The party elect one of them as Prime Minister.
Granted, one generally knows which MP a party wants to be their leader when the election is held, but it can still chance without rhyme or reason, or change of government. Example: Rishi Sunak (2023).
You know this by now, I guess, but these are good stories. As a reader, I'd like to think I can make a tiny repayment.
11/19/2023 c107 crystallillian
Loved this story, I would love to see Severus and Kali life in more detail.
Loved this story, I would love to see Severus and Kali life in more detail.
11/17/2023 c107 luna de selene
It was ...brilliant. my favorite story. An absolute masterpiece from you. Congratulations on ending your fantastic story.
*gives you a bouquet of flowers*
It was ...brilliant. my favorite story. An absolute masterpiece from you. Congratulations on ending your fantastic story.
*gives you a bouquet of flowers*
11/16/2023 c21 roxannemorgan
This is a really good story. I just wanted to mention one detail that jars - the use of plastic for strips on keys for the room doors. Plastic isn't around in the 1940s. They have things like bakelite (e.g. for the old radios), but not plastic. Anything attached to keys would be either heavy card stock, or engraved polished metal.
Please take this as intended helpfully. I grew up with parents who had been in WW2, so I knew what they thought of as "new", even if it was normal to me. (One of those things was bananas, oddly enough. All bananas were imports to Britain, so with the U Boats, there weren't any. Some kids born during the war didn't know what to make of these yellow things when the war ended.)
I read a lot of Potter fanfic and I've been reading yours for a long time. Love it. :-)
This is a really good story. I just wanted to mention one detail that jars - the use of plastic for strips on keys for the room doors. Plastic isn't around in the 1940s. They have things like bakelite (e.g. for the old radios), but not plastic. Anything attached to keys would be either heavy card stock, or engraved polished metal.
Please take this as intended helpfully. I grew up with parents who had been in WW2, so I knew what they thought of as "new", even if it was normal to me. (One of those things was bananas, oddly enough. All bananas were imports to Britain, so with the U Boats, there weren't any. Some kids born during the war didn't know what to make of these yellow things when the war ended.)
I read a lot of Potter fanfic and I've been reading yours for a long time. Love it. :-)
11/16/2023 c107 MrTom.DildoLover
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And reviews written by AI bot programs.
And DebsTheSlythrinSnapeFan has around two thousand alt accounts to leave fake reviews and praise her sad bitch self in a vainglorious attempt at attention.