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11/24/2015 c1 7Austro-Hungarian Empire
I am surprised that this story does not have any reviews, I quite enjoyed it, seems as though you could copy and paste it into the book yourself. Now, why it is short, I do find the idea significantly more appealing of Pammy having more of an impact upon the over all story. I found it odd how she did, in fact, made little to no appearance. Shortly after chapter one, I had forgotten her existence, too, until chapter seven. She should have been more of a point to which why Daisy could not leave: a divorce would grant Tom full custody for such and such reason. Still, excellent job I am glad you could post this as yet another example of how to do Great Gatsby right!

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