for Ninja Among Gods12/22/2017 c9 Guest
Plz I need a new chapter
Plz I need a new chapter
17/10/2017 c2 APeculiarOne
Another good chapter, I'm glad to see you are taking measures to improve your story and asked for anyone to beta read for you and the beginning of this chapter.
Another good chapter, I'm glad to see you are taking measures to improve your story and asked for anyone to beta read for you and the beginning of this chapter.
7/10/2017 c1 APeculiarOne
Just started this because I was interested in seeing the execution. So far it's pretty good, but I seriously recommend getting a beta reader, there were some things I could instantly point out as being incorrect in spelling, grammar and punctuation and some words and phrases I drew blank as I their meaning. While it doesn't ruin the story, because it's still good, I'm a bit of a "grammar nazi" so it bothers me but it would still help you get more readers to have a beta reader. You can try using the site to find one or leave an author's note asking if anyone would, officially or not. Nonetheless, good start to something I hope will continue to be updated.
Just started this because I was interested in seeing the execution. So far it's pretty good, but I seriously recommend getting a beta reader, there were some things I could instantly point out as being incorrect in spelling, grammar and punctuation and some words and phrases I drew blank as I their meaning. While it doesn't ruin the story, because it's still good, I'm a bit of a "grammar nazi" so it bothers me but it would still help you get more readers to have a beta reader. You can try using the site to find one or leave an author's note asking if anyone would, officially or not. Nonetheless, good start to something I hope will continue to be updated.
7/10/2017 c10 kumbrakarna
Love the story and I reallllllllllllllly want the next chapter to be released!
Love the story and I reallllllllllllllly want the next chapter to be released!
7/8/2017 c10 Unluckykid
would you be including skins it would be amazing is we get a chapter about everyone playing dress up nix/nox skins are sexy as hell and you can even put new ones
would you be including skins it would be amazing is we get a chapter about everyone playing dress up nix/nox skins are sexy as hell and you can even put new ones
7/6/2017 c10 Guest
Good to have you back
Good to have you back
7/5/2017 c1 no
I think the shinto pantheon are better off smiting the blonde overrated cunt
I think the shinto pantheon are better off smiting the blonde overrated cunt