for The Monster of Twilight Town11/4/2016 c1 
3weirdnwild91
Very nice backstory you got here! I agree that Doopliss should have one, and you've done it well here!
3weirdnwild91Very nice backstory you got here! I agree that Doopliss should have one, and you've done it well here!
10/1/2015 c1 8Sometsuki
The revenge route is never a good one to take, too bad that his dad wasn't able to convince Doopliss not to get back at them all. I understand why he wanted to though. However, he probably wouldn't have become Beldam's new emotional punching bag if he didn't. At least he got to enjoy it while it lasted.
This was a very interesting origin story for Doopliss. I liked your descriptions and it's very plausible. Overall, nice job!
8SometsukiThe revenge route is never a good one to take, too bad that his dad wasn't able to convince Doopliss not to get back at them all. I understand why he wanted to though. However, he probably wouldn't have become Beldam's new emotional punching bag if he didn't. At least he got to enjoy it while it lasted.
This was a very interesting origin story for Doopliss. I liked your descriptions and it's very plausible. Overall, nice job!
10/1/2015 c1 33CosmicKitten89
I have a theory about Doopliss, and Duplighosts in general, but Bowser Jr. fans are not going to like it...
33CosmicKitten89I have a theory about Doopliss, and Duplighosts in general, but Bowser Jr. fans are not going to like it...