for Saving Bella11/22/2024 c32 paulieandgilbert
Gotta say it. It's no wonder Bella's feeling controlled with Emmet trying to take full charge of her. Honestly, where does he get off treating her like his property? Rose really aught to put him in his place on that one,
Bella's already got Charlie, she doesn't need another Dad!
Gotta say it. It's no wonder Bella's feeling controlled with Emmet trying to take full charge of her. Honestly, where does he get off treating her like his property? Rose really aught to put him in his place on that one,
Bella's already got Charlie, she doesn't need another Dad!
11/21/2024 c30 paulieandgilbert
I'm truly enjoying this story and I have a question. if Bella's wearing 'her little t-shirt and gym shorts,' wouldn't the shorts expose some of her scars? Somehow, I doubt she'd want to open that topic for public discussion.
I'm truly enjoying this story and I have a question. if Bella's wearing 'her little t-shirt and gym shorts,' wouldn't the shorts expose some of her scars? Somehow, I doubt she'd want to open that topic for public discussion.
5/30/2024 c9 
14Fontina Ori-chan
you should just tell them that you were helping bella, they will understand. really, it probably will work.
14Fontina Ori-chanyou should just tell them that you were helping bella, they will understand. really, it probably will work.
12/25/2023 c56 existentiallynowhere
you know, I never thought I could get into a Jasper/Bella AU, (I could just never see it), but this fic proved me wrong. I don't tend to review things (this is my first review), but I really just had to give you kudos for this masterwork. Thanks for all the time and work you put into this, it was phenomenal.
you know, I never thought I could get into a Jasper/Bella AU, (I could just never see it), but this fic proved me wrong. I don't tend to review things (this is my first review), but I really just had to give you kudos for this masterwork. Thanks for all the time and work you put into this, it was phenomenal.
7/9/2023 c52 celajwhitney123gmail.com
Eddie is going to try and intimidate Jasper again? that boy never learns!
Eddie is going to try and intimidate Jasper again? that boy never learns!
7/9/2023 c49 celajwhitney123gmail.com
Carlisle didn't want Jasper to make Eddie boy feel bad? what is with that prick? he did this to her and he should see what his actions caused. Carlisle knows all about it because Jasper and probably Alice told him about it, but he wants to spare Eddie's wittle feelings bacause he's so sensitive? what a dick!
Carlisle didn't want Jasper to make Eddie boy feel bad? what is with that prick? he did this to her and he should see what his actions caused. Carlisle knows all about it because Jasper and probably Alice told him about it, but he wants to spare Eddie's wittle feelings bacause he's so sensitive? what a dick!