for Next Steps10/25/2015 c3 sandrahdez3541
love this story its funny with black star and all please update I would love to get a read a new chapter
love this story its funny with black star and all please update I would love to get a read a new chapter
10/9/2015 c3 
8Ynot7
Very cool. Loving Black Star and Kid going all matchmaker. On Soul, what's that saying? "You can dance if you want to." I guess Soul doesn't. XD Oh, and thanks again for mentioning Maka's quest to free Crona.
8Ynot7Very cool. Loving Black Star and Kid going all matchmaker. On Soul, what's that saying? "You can dance if you want to." I guess Soul doesn't. XD Oh, and thanks again for mentioning Maka's quest to free Crona.
10/9/2015 c3 StarfishThrower
A longer chapter! I like the length better on this one if I'm being honest. I also like how Black*Star and Kidd and the gang are all trying to get them together. I can actually see Black*Star doing that hahaha. Another beautiful chapter!
A longer chapter! I like the length better on this one if I'm being honest. I also like how Black*Star and Kidd and the gang are all trying to get them together. I can actually see Black*Star doing that hahaha. Another beautiful chapter!
10/4/2015 c2 Guest
I enjoyed your story and can't wait to read more X3
I enjoyed your story and can't wait to read more X3
10/2/2015 c2 Ynot7
This is quite good. I'm rather interested to see where it goes. Curious, anything in mind for Crona? I always kinda went with the headcanon that Maka would find a way to free them someday, since they both seemed to think they'd see each other again.
This is quite good. I'm rather interested to see where it goes. Curious, anything in mind for Crona? I always kinda went with the headcanon that Maka would find a way to free them someday, since they both seemed to think they'd see each other again.
10/2/2015 c2 StarfishThrower
Okay first of all I am going to have to draw Maka in that dress, it sounds gorgeous. Your attention to detail is really amazing and the way you describe things is so vivid it's like I'm watching it in my head. Keep up the fantastic work, I love it so far!
Okay first of all I am going to have to draw Maka in that dress, it sounds gorgeous. Your attention to detail is really amazing and the way you describe things is so vivid it's like I'm watching it in my head. Keep up the fantastic work, I love it so far!
10/2/2015 c1 StarfishThrower
This is beautiful. Soul is so in character it's amazing. Don't beat yourself up in the author's notes though! You have a great story and you should flaunt it :)
This is beautiful. Soul is so in character it's amazing. Don't beat yourself up in the author's notes though! You have a great story and you should flaunt it :)