
11/2/2016 c12 jayfeather63
Loved the chapter. Harry's adorably loyal waiting for Hermione outside the bathroom. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Loved the chapter. Harry's adorably loyal waiting for Hermione outside the bathroom. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
7/29/2016 c11 HoneyBear84
Glad Harry's finally found out what the locked room is, I always thought that there sud be a Blade/dueling class, it wud kinda fit with the defense class lol. probably cut by the meddling old coot, for reasons only he knew lol
Glad Harry's finally found out what the locked room is, I always thought that there sud be a Blade/dueling class, it wud kinda fit with the defense class lol. probably cut by the meddling old coot, for reasons only he knew lol
7/29/2016 c11 HoneyBear84
Love it as always and seriously can't wait for the next update. So is Hermione part of the colt then?
Love it as always and seriously can't wait for the next update. So is Hermione part of the colt then?
5/10/2016 c10 Kaidyen
Firstly - This is the first time I have ever like Percy. Even slightly. His interruption of the Gryffindors drooling all over the Nimbus - priiiiiceless.
Also enjoy the fact that you focused on the sports portion of Quidditch... the fact that most sports aren't simply playing the game - physical fitness is such a large part of it as well.
Love Fred and George singing in the locker room.
As always, wonderful scene descriptions.
Firstly - This is the first time I have ever like Percy. Even slightly. His interruption of the Gryffindors drooling all over the Nimbus - priiiiiceless.
Also enjoy the fact that you focused on the sports portion of Quidditch... the fact that most sports aren't simply playing the game - physical fitness is such a large part of it as well.
Love Fred and George singing in the locker room.
As always, wonderful scene descriptions.
5/10/2016 c9 Kaidyen
Firstly, I apologize for the lack of reviews the last couple of chapters - Sorry!
Your descriptions of places is fantastic; I wish I had the ability to immerse the reader into a location as you do. I also like how even though Harry is not the BWL, you are managing to decorate his world with enough problems. You also are keeping in mind the very human elements of the characters, the issue with Lily, the fight with Hermione - fantastic.
I really crave Harry and Draco building a friendship, which you are sprinkling the chances of happening so lightly it is torture. But the best sort.
Thanks for the update(s) - off I go to the next chapter.
Firstly, I apologize for the lack of reviews the last couple of chapters - Sorry!
Your descriptions of places is fantastic; I wish I had the ability to immerse the reader into a location as you do. I also like how even though Harry is not the BWL, you are managing to decorate his world with enough problems. You also are keeping in mind the very human elements of the characters, the issue with Lily, the fight with Hermione - fantastic.
I really crave Harry and Draco building a friendship, which you are sprinkling the chances of happening so lightly it is torture. But the best sort.
Thanks for the update(s) - off I go to the next chapter.