for Stripes and Pinkie11/6/2016 c12 
35OakwoodOuroboros
huh, I read this a while back, and now that I read it again I find it rather endearing in it's sloppiness and hundreds of hilarious typos. Still, it's sweet and kind of dramatic, so it makes up for a lot. There are quite a few intelligent little details and head cannons that I find good as well, but ugh.
Please.
Change the rating.
I hate porn si much.
I really do.
35OakwoodOuroboroshuh, I read this a while back, and now that I read it again I find it rather endearing in it's sloppiness and hundreds of hilarious typos. Still, it's sweet and kind of dramatic, so it makes up for a lot. There are quite a few intelligent little details and head cannons that I find good as well, but ugh.
Please.
Change the rating.
I hate porn si much.
I really do.
8/5/2016 c13 1EchoTheNerdWolf
You need a rating change, this would count as M. if you don't want to change it, in the summary put chapter 13 M rated
1EchoTheNerdWolfYou need a rating change, this would count as M. if you don't want to change it, in the summary put chapter 13 M rated
1/17/2016 c13 Guest
Errr... Change the rating ? Please ?
Errr... Change the rating ? Please ?
11/12/2015 c13 S
Is there going to be a chapter 14?
Is there going to be a chapter 14?
10/18/2015 c13 Ry
THis has been getting really interesting. Thank you for writing it. I hope you continue it soon. Thanks!
THis has been getting really interesting. Thank you for writing it. I hope you continue it soon. Thanks!
10/6/2015 c7 25jcrycolr3wradc
"Precious Crona deserves perfection." Is a great line, and is my motto as well Kid! I'm interested to see where this story goes. Thank you!
25jcrycolr3wradc"Precious Crona deserves perfection." Is a great line, and is my motto as well Kid! I'm interested to see where this story goes. Thank you!