for Living Twice: Altering the Present4/25 c35 Guest
NOOOO, the fluff, where is it(*Д*)
NOOOO, the fluff, where is it(*Д*)
9/3/2024 c2 TheGoodDoctor13
How did Naruto run out of chakra doing a few shadow clones and a substitution? That shouldn't even be possible, he can make thousands and keep going
How did Naruto run out of chakra doing a few shadow clones and a substitution? That shouldn't even be possible, he can make thousands and keep going
7/2/2023 c1 Axccel
You really should make the summary about the story instead of a bad attempt at poetry.
You really should make the summary about the story instead of a bad attempt at poetry.
2/19/2023 c10 Guest
You got Naruto running around with a glock lol
You got Naruto running around with a glock lol
8/11/2022 c5 Guest
*epitaph noises*
*epitaph noises*
8/11/2022 c1 Guest
*doppio calling the boss*
*doppio calling the boss*
1/18/2022 c35 Danny Williams
Great story with a little bit of everything.
Great story with a little bit of everything.
12/4/2021 c32 M
I feel like you jumped the shark here... I’m just skimming at this point, because it’s no longer engaging.
I feel like you jumped the shark here... I’m just skimming at this point, because it’s no longer engaging.
26/16/2021 c9 Dissapointed
It started nice but the deeper I go into the story, the worse it becomes, the more the author focuses on emotional drama. Honestly, the authors have some kind of bad predisposition to make stories dramatic by trying to show how bad their MC has it that he has OP ability. They try to show that not everything is as good as it seems. They try to force their readers through chapters of useless chit-chat and description of depressing bullshit.
But their MC does NOT even TRY to make the best out of what he has. The scene with Haku? Naruto instantly eluded to two timelines he predicted. Either Haku walks away or he kills her. There was no middle ground for him. It simply showed how limited he is as he CAN'T do anything without predicting it first. He refuses to do anything that deviates from his foresight. He could have captured her. He could have put effort into making sure she is not killed if he cared so much as the author tried to portray by making it into some kind of sob-story. As I said, it was just full of shit and useless drama that cheapened the previously good story to the level of a one-eyed, one-legged, toothless whore.
It started nice but the deeper I go into the story, the worse it becomes, the more the author focuses on emotional drama. Honestly, the authors have some kind of bad predisposition to make stories dramatic by trying to show how bad their MC has it that he has OP ability. They try to show that not everything is as good as it seems. They try to force their readers through chapters of useless chit-chat and description of depressing bullshit.
But their MC does NOT even TRY to make the best out of what he has. The scene with Haku? Naruto instantly eluded to two timelines he predicted. Either Haku walks away or he kills her. There was no middle ground for him. It simply showed how limited he is as he CAN'T do anything without predicting it first. He refuses to do anything that deviates from his foresight. He could have captured her. He could have put effort into making sure she is not killed if he cared so much as the author tried to portray by making it into some kind of sob-story. As I said, it was just full of shit and useless drama that cheapened the previously good story to the level of a one-eyed, one-legged, toothless whore.
5/1/2021 c1 yaboyameterasu
why orange bro tf well anyways this is really good so far lets hope he's stronger than canon however
why orange bro tf well anyways this is really good so far lets hope he's stronger than canon however
4/28/2021 c35 TheSlySage
i know you're around I look forward to the continuation. this was epid thus far and it just needs a bow really
i know you're around I look forward to the continuation. this was epid thus far and it just needs a bow really
4/28/2021 c16 TheSlySage
very original 1st exam love when Anko turns the lights back on to see *who got axed* lol
very original 1st exam love when Anko turns the lights back on to see *who got axed* lol