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7/2/2023 c1 Axccel
You really should make the summary about the story instead of a bad attempt at poetry.
2/19/2023 c10 Guest
You got Naruto running around with a glock lol
8/11/2022 c5 Guest
*epitaph noises*
8/11/2022 c1 Guest
*doppio calling the boss*
1/18/2022 c35 Danny Williams
Great story with a little bit of everything.
1/17/2022 c35 Alallen123
Come back and finish this please.
12/4/2021 c32 M
I feel like you jumped the shark here... I’m just skimming at this point, because it’s no longer engaging.
9/27/2021 c4 FeelSpyre
you sly sly human being I see the edit in 2021
9/22/2021 c35 2TheSlySage
loved this one hope you update! holy crap it hasn't updated in 2 years
6/16/2021 c9 Dissapointed
It started nice but the deeper I go into the story, the worse it becomes, the more the author focuses on emotional drama. Honestly, the authors have some kind of bad predisposition to make stories dramatic by trying to show how bad their MC has it that he has OP ability. They try to show that not everything is as good as it seems. They try to force their readers through chapters of useless chit-chat and description of depressing bullshit.

But their MC does NOT even TRY to make the best out of what he has. The scene with Haku? Naruto instantly eluded to two timelines he predicted. Either Haku walks away or he kills her. There was no middle ground for him. It simply showed how limited he is as he CAN'T do anything without predicting it first. He refuses to do anything that deviates from his foresight. He could have captured her. He could have put effort into making sure she is not killed if he cared so much as the author tried to portray by making it into some kind of sob-story. As I said, it was just full of shit and useless drama that cheapened the previously good story to the level of a one-eyed, one-legged, toothless whore.
5/1/2021 c1 yaboyameterasu
why orange bro tf well anyways this is really good so far lets hope he's stronger than canon however
4/28/2021 c35 TheSlySage
i know you're around I look forward to the continuation. this was epid thus far and it just needs a bow really
4/28/2021 c16 TheSlySage
very original 1st exam love when Anko turns the lights back on to see *who got axed* lol
4/27/2021 c12 TheSlySage
high end watches run on the motion of the body. essentially the movement of the wrist as one goes about their day keeps the gears moving to keep time. thats the kind of Watch he would wear. the tech for that is incredibly old as well. they have watch cases that spin the watch over and over all day to keep it powered when not worn.
4/27/2021 c3 TheSlySage
interesting weapon I just picture like a wide Ninjato with a rounded blunt back that unfolds like a baton
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