for Living Twice: Altering the Present2/8/2017 c21 
9Ziltoid
Did I review this last chapter? Yes? No? Dunno. Still had the alert in my mail, but when I started to read I realized I've read it before. I'm sloppy..
Still, the chapter was nice. Loved the twist. Hopefully you'll be able to write the next one soon! :P
9ZiltoidDid I review this last chapter? Yes? No? Dunno. Still had the alert in my mail, but when I started to read I realized I've read it before. I'm sloppy..
Still, the chapter was nice. Loved the twist. Hopefully you'll be able to write the next one soon! :P
1/11/2017 c1 Guest
Pretty sure sakura has a harem of guys in one of these stories
Pretty sure sakura has a harem of guys in one of these stories
12/18/2016 c21 xavierp
I'm really enjoying this. Must be hard as hell to write it, even without the cryptic hints. I guessed a few chapters back that Kin was getting the talent too, but you introduced it really well. I also like that you allowed the friendship to grow between Kin and Naruto rather than, as many authors do, sat "hay, i dunno why but i luv you" which really annoys me.
Loving the way this is shown as blessing and a curse and really hope you complete this story. I'll certainly keep reading it.
I'm really enjoying this. Must be hard as hell to write it, even without the cryptic hints. I guessed a few chapters back that Kin was getting the talent too, but you introduced it really well. I also like that you allowed the friendship to grow between Kin and Naruto rather than, as many authors do, sat "hay, i dunno why but i luv you" which really annoys me.
Loving the way this is shown as blessing and a curse and really hope you complete this story. I'll certainly keep reading it.
12/14/2016 c21 3Nightshadegirl
yes, i finally caught up in chapters, interesting that kin is now having a vision.
3Nightshadegirlyes, i finally caught up in chapters, interesting that kin is now having a vision.
12/14/2016 c20 Nightshadegirl
that was sweet was kin did at the end for naruto though i would have preferred chocolate cake with buttercream frosting.
that was sweet was kin did at the end for naruto though i would have preferred chocolate cake with buttercream frosting.
12/14/2016 c17 Nightshadegirl
kakashi and anko together, maybe kinda. i hoped naruto gives kin a chance to redeem herself, she was under pressure by kabuto(that jerk).
kakashi and anko together, maybe kinda. i hoped naruto gives kin a chance to redeem herself, she was under pressure by kabuto(that jerk).
12/14/2016 c16 Nightshadegirl
love how you did the first part of the exam, really original and confusing, to me at least somewhat.
love how you did the first part of the exam, really original and confusing, to me at least somewhat.