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11/15/2015 c2 Bobtrumpet
Interesting. I wasn't a big fan of "Brown;" a little too manufactured in the twist department (not bad by any means, just a little too different). Probably just not my cup of tea.
This one, however, has a little more going for it; followed and favorited. I am looking very forward to the next installment and its comclusion.
10/8/2015 c2 26Sentinel103
Either good or bad...since I'm the fly in the ointment (LOL) I'll go with this; Now that the evil doers have both Kim and Ron the bad guys will torture both heroes until Kim has to give up on Ron to a very painful end which will break her and finish her crime fighting days...hummmmm I might just write one like that myself!

ST-103
10/7/2015 c2 4CajunBear73
Oh boy, what is to come...?

CB73
10/7/2015 c1 1Firefly115
Really interesting start. I'll be looking forward to the next installment.
10/6/2015 c1 51Sharper the Writer
Such a good beginning to the story!
10/6/2015 c1 cybercorpsesnake
Good chapter. Keep up the good work.
10/6/2015 c1 4CajunBear73
Oy...Intentions, paving roads with them.

And where they go.

CB73

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