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1/9/2017 c3 Guest
Sorry, but not only did the Animagus thing make him an official Gary Stu, I have no idea what's going on here at all.
10/24/2016 c3 fightingstoryaddiction
Cool really can't wait to read more!
10/24/2016 c1 fightingstoryaddiction
Awesome will he get a mokeskin bag and take a trip over to the seventh floor and pilfer the room of lost things to sell oh and idea they say you can think up anything in the come and go room but can't take conjuried things out what about thinking up magical manufacturing machines that once inside you dump real material into and the rooms machine turns it into the finishing product you either personally need or want to sell he he he...

Like creating magic all beanie babies collections in a flash the ROM takes your materials and poof you got thousands of products ready to sell oh oh oh wait creating collectable its or fun magical games copied from the muggle side but the character knows everything awesome made on the muggle side could be made on the magical side since there missing out on the number one thing that can control the masses in information entertainment and marketing and that is cable TV but magical style with magical mirror visions international power mwahahahahahahahahahahahahah! No matter what timeline in HP world I'd bring in TV for only those who do have the POWER! .MWAHahahahahahahacoughahahahahahahahaha!
3/6/2016 c1 780Yemi Hikari
Bless your heart, but no DM in their right mind would ever set up a role play in the manner you did, allowing for the characters the person plays as end up being bloody Gary Stus. Truth of the matter is, while I get the fact this is supposed to be your "self insert" for fun, that doesn't mean you the writer are free from criticism. A lot of the abilities either don't exist, are abilities that one needs to work for, or are ones that are genetically linked to magical bloodlines, and yet there you are giving your OC these powers. The drawbacks you bring up, no DM in their right mind would even consider them drawbacks. As for getting to be able to read books without getting bored, that isn't a trait tied into being a Mudblood, but a definite Hermi-ism. It's kind of a joke really - what's the point of the whole RP scenario even? You can just Godmode your OC without it, without dragging down the hard work a good DM goes through - actually, I doubt you would understand a good DM's frustration regarding players who want to play god in another persons world - they consider it an ego trip on the part of the player, and it's highly frowned upon. End of story.
12/8/2015 c3 2dogsrulz77
This is awesome please write more!
10/15/2015 c3 LittleFaeChild
Love it! :D

Amazing story!
10/9/2015 c2 22edboy4926
Good chapter.
10/9/2015 c2 LittleFaeChild
Lovely. :)
10/9/2015 c2 3Reishin Amara
LMAO. I think he just scared the poor puttycat.
10/8/2015 c2 DarkDust27
Love it update soon please! :)
10/8/2015 c1 22edboy4926
Interesting intro.
10/8/2015 c1 179Qoheleth
Dear Spirit:

Tiny thing, but - would you really call that summary K-rated?

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

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