10/10/2015 c1 David
And this, WeskerKing1, is why I love fanfiction. Because I get to see worlds I enjoy with a completely new take on them. And I think your idea is awesome, because who wouldn't be tempted to live out your childhood again, knowing all the mistakes you made and having the chance to prevent them? Also, even though I've read only two of the characters (Max and Chloe) I feel your personalities are spot on with how they act in the game (and the meshing of the two Max personalities is superb so far). Besides that, there are only a few (very few) grammatical errors and you occasionally drop a word during typing (ie: dropped way in "then there's no real for me to describe..." in the ninth paragraph). Ignoring the very minor mistakes, I think Exploring the Chaos is a very charming piece. Please, keep up the good work!