for The Vampire's Apprentice12/22/2017 c1 Guest
So first ups i love the position you’ve put Matthew in, more of a leader and authoritative, with respect from the other characters. You’ve brought out and written that side to him excellently and in a manner that makes his character very interesting. I applaud you, really.
This is a compelling take in a vampire AU and is curious to see where you run with this.
So first ups i love the position you’ve put Matthew in, more of a leader and authoritative, with respect from the other characters. You’ve brought out and written that side to him excellently and in a manner that makes his character very interesting. I applaud you, really.
This is a compelling take in a vampire AU and is curious to see where you run with this.
12/12/2016 c3 Pyruvate
You write so ridiculously well and this fic is my favorite out of all your works (I have a soft spot for supernatural AUs) so I really hope you can update soon!
You write so ridiculously well and this fic is my favorite out of all your works (I have a soft spot for supernatural AUs) so I really hope you can update soon!
12/8/2016 c1 
37Polly Little
It seems like you've put a lot of thought into this, and so far it's as good as (if not better than) many published vampire stories.
37Polly LittleIt seems like you've put a lot of thought into this, and so far it's as good as (if not better than) many published vampire stories.
12/8/2016 c3 Polly Little
Why not bring blankets? If it isn't warm enough down there, that would make sense.
Why not bring blankets? If it isn't warm enough down there, that would make sense.
11/21/2016 c3 heijegheterostepopp
The only thing I don't like about this fic is that it's not updated since October 2015 :(
The only thing I don't like about this fic is that it's not updated since October 2015 :(
8/19/2016 c1 56LeFay Strent
I came back to reread this and it's just as good as I remembered. I know you're working on other stories, but I do hope that you come back to this one eventually.
56LeFay StrentI came back to reread this and it's just as good as I remembered. I know you're working on other stories, but I do hope that you come back to this one eventually.
8/13/2016 c3 Antheia Gwynn
I honestly love love love this story - the whole premise of it is really interesting. I love how you twist the traditional idea of a vampire and make us really sympathise with them (and boy do I feel sorry for all of them). I really hope you continue with this fic, because it's quite honestly one of the best I've read in a while!
I honestly love love love this story - the whole premise of it is really interesting. I love how you twist the traditional idea of a vampire and make us really sympathise with them (and boy do I feel sorry for all of them). I really hope you continue with this fic, because it's quite honestly one of the best I've read in a while!
6/19/2016 c3 Guest
Omg, I really love this story. It's so different then the usual vampire stories I've read. I feel like Arthur is hiding something from Alfred in regards to his sickness and it seems as he is forming sort of an attachment to Alfred just like Francis and Matthew no? I can't wait to see the next chapter for this, especially as to see what will happen with Arthur and Alfred.
Omg, I really love this story. It's so different then the usual vampire stories I've read. I feel like Arthur is hiding something from Alfred in regards to his sickness and it seems as he is forming sort of an attachment to Alfred just like Francis and Matthew no? I can't wait to see the next chapter for this, especially as to see what will happen with Arthur and Alfred.
6/8/2016 c3 Guest
More please
More please
4/23/2016 c3 LeFay Strent
This is so fascinating. I don't think I've seen an idea quite like it, so it's definitely a breath of fresh air where vampire stories are concerned. I would love to see more of this, at least Arthur getting out to Alfred's place and being able to experience the world. I mean, of course you might have other plot twists in mind, but it's great to imagine Arthur finally getting out after being cooped up for so long and getting that shower.
This is so fascinating. I don't think I've seen an idea quite like it, so it's definitely a breath of fresh air where vampire stories are concerned. I would love to see more of this, at least Arthur getting out to Alfred's place and being able to experience the world. I mean, of course you might have other plot twists in mind, but it's great to imagine Arthur finally getting out after being cooped up for so long and getting that shower.
10/25/2015 c3 faithfulbuddy
Alfred and Mathew make a great team. All the tech stuff you incorporated was realky neat! So who is the new vampire? You only told us eye color so that makes it hard to guess. And I sense a little rivary starting between Arthur and the new vampire, since Alfred got hurt trying to be a hero. Can't wait for more!
Alfred and Mathew make a great team. All the tech stuff you incorporated was realky neat! So who is the new vampire? You only told us eye color so that makes it hard to guess. And I sense a little rivary starting between Arthur and the new vampire, since Alfred got hurt trying to be a hero. Can't wait for more!
10/25/2015 c2 faithfulbuddy
Awww. Poor Arthur. He must be really bad off if Alfred can't stand to look at him. But Francis's comment on Arthur's ugly mug made me crack up! Yay for classic Francis-Arthur bickering. So far I am really enjoying this. Keep up the good work! Please I beg you! Now on to chapter 3! :D
Awww. Poor Arthur. He must be really bad off if Alfred can't stand to look at him. But Francis's comment on Arthur's ugly mug made me crack up! Yay for classic Francis-Arthur bickering. So far I am really enjoying this. Keep up the good work! Please I beg you! Now on to chapter 3! :D
10/25/2015 c3 1redwingto
Aaaaaaahhhhhmygosh. Dude I was cringing so hard at the cheek part. Aasdfghjk no.
But man I can't wait for arthur to get out of the sewers but it'll be so hard for them to keep up the lies and not seem suspicious. That and Arthur's probably never going to get better unfortunately since he was sick as a human
1redwingtoAaaaaaahhhhhmygosh. Dude I was cringing so hard at the cheek part. Aasdfghjk no.
But man I can't wait for arthur to get out of the sewers but it'll be so hard for them to keep up the lies and not seem suspicious. That and Arthur's probably never going to get better unfortunately since he was sick as a human