for Four Words9/20/2019 c2 Guest
It’s so sad to see something so well written never finished. Tis the curse of fanfiction..
I rather enjoyed the two chapters that do exist
It’s so sad to see something so well written never finished. Tis the curse of fanfiction..
I rather enjoyed the two chapters that do exist
8/18/2016 c2 
16Lalaofthealpacas
Ooh, Smithy's line about Gunther breathing fire is so wonderful! Also this is probably the most in character I've ever seen Sir Ivon in fanfiction, you do such a great job making the secondary characters seem so much like themselves and it adds a ton to the story. I hope you continue this soon, though of course I've never been one to talk. Hope you are doing well! :))
16LalaofthealpacasOoh, Smithy's line about Gunther breathing fire is so wonderful! Also this is probably the most in character I've ever seen Sir Ivon in fanfiction, you do such a great job making the secondary characters seem so much like themselves and it adds a ton to the story. I hope you continue this soon, though of course I've never been one to talk. Hope you are doing well! :))
8/18/2016 c1 Lalaofthealpacas
OH MY GOD. Is Gunther writing his own love story about them? Or poetry for Jane? AHHH. I'm so excited to see where this leads! Also, I love love your writing here. The way that you characterize everyone is spot on, exactly like the show - especially Jane and Dragon's interactions, the dialogue was absolutely flawless. I love too that you show Jane not being great at something knightly, because I think sometimes we all love her so much we pretend she's fabulous at everything, which isn't true of course. On to the next chapter!
OH MY GOD. Is Gunther writing his own love story about them? Or poetry for Jane? AHHH. I'm so excited to see where this leads! Also, I love love your writing here. The way that you characterize everyone is spot on, exactly like the show - especially Jane and Dragon's interactions, the dialogue was absolutely flawless. I love too that you show Jane not being great at something knightly, because I think sometimes we all love her so much we pretend she's fabulous at everything, which isn't true of course. On to the next chapter!
12/10/2015 c2 4Amelle Kyre
I loved what he wrote about her!
Even she cannot deny that it was written for her.
Look at her trying to take some of the blame. I feel like she feels guilty not just for not finding him sooner but because he was off writing about her, maybe that's just me though.
And Gunther being all mad... It such typical Gunther.
I love this, thanks so much! And I'm so sorry that I haven't been around. I can't wait to see what happens next!
4Amelle KyreI loved what he wrote about her!
Even she cannot deny that it was written for her.
Look at her trying to take some of the blame. I feel like she feels guilty not just for not finding him sooner but because he was off writing about her, maybe that's just me though.
And Gunther being all mad... It such typical Gunther.
I love this, thanks so much! And I'm so sorry that I haven't been around. I can't wait to see what happens next!
11/24/2015 c2 5TheSecondBestBed
Ooh, Gunther's quite the romantic~ I guess he's all hot and bothered now that Jane nearly caught him in the act, and I understand why he's upset, but he's also being a bit of a douche. I wouldn't have the patience Jane has thats for sure! Still I'm excited to see where this goes, and the rest of that poem!
5TheSecondBestBedOoh, Gunther's quite the romantic~ I guess he's all hot and bothered now that Jane nearly caught him in the act, and I understand why he's upset, but he's also being a bit of a douche. I wouldn't have the patience Jane has thats for sure! Still I'm excited to see where this goes, and the rest of that poem!
11/16/2015 c2 51Kyra4
Wow, she is certainly distracted! I guess I would be too, under the circumstances. What a bizarre discovery to make, about someone whom you've always assumed has, at BEST, tolerated you and no more!
And Jane, gosh, she's always so well-intentioned, isn't she? But not picking up on the fact that the last thing in the WORLD Gunther would want at this point is to feel pitied by her or like she's trying to fight his battles for her. For all her many strengths, she's always great at reading people, lol! Gunther mad enough to breathe fire, yes I can DEFINITELY imagine that!
By the way, in the context you used it, the spelling is piqued, not peaked :)
51Kyra4Wow, she is certainly distracted! I guess I would be too, under the circumstances. What a bizarre discovery to make, about someone whom you've always assumed has, at BEST, tolerated you and no more!
And Jane, gosh, she's always so well-intentioned, isn't she? But not picking up on the fact that the last thing in the WORLD Gunther would want at this point is to feel pitied by her or like she's trying to fight his battles for her. For all her many strengths, she's always great at reading people, lol! Gunther mad enough to breathe fire, yes I can DEFINITELY imagine that!
By the way, in the context you used it, the spelling is piqued, not peaked :)
10/16/2015 c1 51Kyra4
Ahhhhh cuteness!
Hmm... What comes next? Is she going to confront him? Try to collect more "evidence" without him knowing? Just stew about it? Does she reciprocate his feelings at all? I mean, yeah she spends most go this chapter feeling pretty exasperated - but on a deeper level? And he doesn't have emerald eyes of course - but grey eyes are GORGEOUS especially in combination with dark hair! I'm definitely intrigued! :)
51Kyra4Ahhhhh cuteness!
Hmm... What comes next? Is she going to confront him? Try to collect more "evidence" without him knowing? Just stew about it? Does she reciprocate his feelings at all? I mean, yeah she spends most go this chapter feeling pretty exasperated - but on a deeper level? And he doesn't have emerald eyes of course - but grey eyes are GORGEOUS especially in combination with dark hair! I'm definitely intrigued! :)
10/16/2015 c1 5TheSecondBestBed
Very exciting read! I felt a little bad for Jane for having to go through all that trouble, just to have Gunther yell at her...although I think I can see why now. ;) I can't wait for more of the story to develop!
5TheSecondBestBedVery exciting read! I felt a little bad for Jane for having to go through all that trouble, just to have Gunther yell at her...although I think I can see why now. ;) I can't wait for more of the story to develop!
10/12/2015 c1 4Amelle Kyre
First of all, sorry sorry sorry! That it took so long for me to review! But I read this at like 3:30 in the morning cause I was to excited to wait even tho I had to get up at 5:30 that day!
But Thank you so so so so much! This is super awesome! Its so cute and I love it! And I'm super happy to read your writing once more!
Oh, man the end part with Gunther made me laugh so much! Gunther was so flustered! (In fact my dirty mind thought at first that he had girl with him haha)
But there is no denying what he wrote! Oh Jane what are you going to do with this!
Your story makes me super happy! I can't wait to see what happens next. The only flaw that I could spot was the damn google translate cause it sucks! XD Next Time let me be your translator, because you needed up with a Theodore that much more deplorable with the language than Jane!
But thank you so much my friend! Looooove this!
4Amelle KyreFirst of all, sorry sorry sorry! That it took so long for me to review! But I read this at like 3:30 in the morning cause I was to excited to wait even tho I had to get up at 5:30 that day!
But Thank you so so so so much! This is super awesome! Its so cute and I love it! And I'm super happy to read your writing once more!
Oh, man the end part with Gunther made me laugh so much! Gunther was so flustered! (In fact my dirty mind thought at first that he had girl with him haha)
But there is no denying what he wrote! Oh Jane what are you going to do with this!
Your story makes me super happy! I can't wait to see what happens next. The only flaw that I could spot was the damn google translate cause it sucks! XD Next Time let me be your translator, because you needed up with a Theodore that much more deplorable with the language than Jane!
But thank you so much my friend! Looooove this!