
12/26/2015 c7
8xMousex
Hey, this was a really good story idea! Maybe G can be for "Grateful"? But all in all, I like all of these little mini stories and I like how some of them connect to others. Like how C and D connected haha the dog's addition to the crew is adorable. So update soon. I can't wait to read more!

Hey, this was a really good story idea! Maybe G can be for "Grateful"? But all in all, I like all of these little mini stories and I like how some of them connect to others. Like how C and D connected haha the dog's addition to the crew is adorable. So update soon. I can't wait to read more!
10/18/2015 c1 Guest
Cool
Cool
10/12/2015 c2 All Barrels
I would like to point out Mr. Avocado. What an interesting name.
I would like to point out Mr. Avocado. What an interesting name.
10/12/2015 c2
1XxMellowHeart11xX
I like your idea! The chapters are interesting though they could be longer, more people might read them, but they're free of grammar mistakes! For E, you could do Evil (character) or East Blue. For F, you could do Friends. I hope that helped! Bye ;)

I like your idea! The chapters are interesting though they could be longer, more people might read them, but they're free of grammar mistakes! For E, you could do Evil (character) or East Blue. For F, you could do Friends. I hope that helped! Bye ;)