for The Follow Up5/31/2018 c5 
66lalez
Hey,
so I am usually not one drawn to OC's but these two just kept me in the story and reading.
Thanks for sharing :)
66lalezHey,
so I am usually not one drawn to OC's but these two just kept me in the story and reading.
Thanks for sharing :)
3/31/2016 c5 Vadercat
so I think you should make a follow up story to the follow up story. You're a romantic at heart, let it flow free.
so I think you should make a follow up story to the follow up story. You're a romantic at heart, let it flow free.
10/18/2015 c5 JodyMarie
What a fun story to read! it was great to see Saul and Jamie in the beginnings of their relationship. Loved how Mrs. Lorne was caught up in the spirit of "spying". That was a great touch. Thanks for letting Evan and Jenn have a small part in this chapter. Thanks for sharing!
Hint...mmm...a "Follow up" wedding? with mayhem and mischief?
What a fun story to read! it was great to see Saul and Jamie in the beginnings of their relationship. Loved how Mrs. Lorne was caught up in the spirit of "spying". That was a great touch. Thanks for letting Evan and Jenn have a small part in this chapter. Thanks for sharing!
Hint...mmm...a "Follow up" wedding? with mayhem and mischief?
10/16/2015 c5 22hifield
Contented sighs ... this was a lovely little break and I enjoyed every chapter! I'm hoping you'll continue the story with all four of the characters ... I can just imagine Saul and James somehow ending up in the Pegasus galaxy or at least in the same neighborhood with Evan and Jen!
Thanks so much for sharing - hope it inspired you enough to keep writing and maybe finish some of your other stories.
22hifieldContented sighs ... this was a lovely little break and I enjoyed every chapter! I'm hoping you'll continue the story with all four of the characters ... I can just imagine Saul and James somehow ending up in the Pegasus galaxy or at least in the same neighborhood with Evan and Jen!
Thanks so much for sharing - hope it inspired you enough to keep writing and maybe finish some of your other stories.
10/16/2015 c3 LMXB
That was kinda heart wrenching - I really hope he hurries up and flies to meet her.
That was kinda heart wrenching - I really hope he hurries up and flies to meet her.
10/15/2015 c4 15daisyscrapper
If I could pick my favorite chapter on FF, this would be it. Goodness, there is so much romantic build up you leave us finally relieved at the end yet still eager to read more.
The part with them all spying on the them in the end was priceless.
Is there more? Love these two couples!
15daisyscrapperIf I could pick my favorite chapter on FF, this would be it. Goodness, there is so much romantic build up you leave us finally relieved at the end yet still eager to read more.
The part with them all spying on the them in the end was priceless.
Is there more? Love these two couples!
10/15/2015 c3 daisyscrapper
They kissed! I love how it was not the type of kiss that had their relationship wrapped in a pretty bow. Jamie needs to "process" and poor Saul wants immediate clarification.
I am so thrilled you posted this!
They kissed! I love how it was not the type of kiss that had their relationship wrapped in a pretty bow. Jamie needs to "process" and poor Saul wants immediate clarification.
I am so thrilled you posted this!
10/15/2015 c2 daisyscrapper
It is funny how they both feel the same way yet each of them think the other doesn't return the feelings. I love the flirty friendship they have in this chapter. When he calls her "James," it's really showing how affectionate they are. The romance suspense is building!
It is funny how they both feel the same way yet each of them think the other doesn't return the feelings. I love the flirty friendship they have in this chapter. When he calls her "James," it's really showing how affectionate they are. The romance suspense is building!