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11/11/2015 c6 bankai777
Will Naruto's past comeback to haunt him.
11/11/2015 c6 SPark681
Nice chapter seems no-one has ID'd Naruto yet wonder how long before his 'past' comes back to haunt him anyways keep up the great work!
11/11/2015 c6 Deathknightguthix
First I can't wait for the next chapter.
Second, I saw no spelling or grammatical errors which is impressive for this site. Sometimes the grammatical errors that people make are just so bad I have to stop reading. There was one story that whenever a person was saying "you" the author was a lazy bum and would type "u". It pissed me off so much.
11/8/2015 c5 Guest
supert
11/10/2015 c5 mexicanbatman68
so far I love your story update when you can.
11/7/2015 c5 Guest
please let it be a mass harem, if the vote for a harem comes to be.
11/7/2015 c5 Guest
Outstanding chapter
11/8/2015 c5 Deathknightguthix
I can't wait for more! Sub Zero's abilities are sweet. I actually wish I had them. Life would be so much easier.
11/7/2015 c5 2Ser Dorito of Aisle 13
Look I like your story, but there's already a lot of Mortal Kombat/Naruto fics that became harems and I think that idea has been overused. I personally would rather see Naruto love one lady instead of a harem.
11/7/2015 c5 UnsanMusho
Nice fight between team 7 and Zabuza and now that Naruto is here I wonder if he'll reveal himself? Anyways IF this story goes the harem route think you can add Tenten? With there being so many awesome kunoichi-like female characters and many weapons for Tenten I can easily see her becoming a better kunoichi herself.
11/7/2015 c5 XXX Chaos Breaker XXX
good fanfiction so far
11/7/2015 c5 bladetri
like
11/7/2015 c5 SPark681
Nice chapter seems Naruto has made an appearance, but kept his identity a secret anyways keep up the great work!
11/7/2015 c5 Shadowdragondanny
Can't wait for the next one
11/7/2015 c5 Mr.Shiki
It was good. A bit short but good.
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