for The Other Side of the Same Coin7/28/2016 c8 
2DaYaNa1997
Please continue updating, I am confused Carlisle is mature enough to never leave his mate alone like Edward did in New Moon, and its is to cliche to make the Cullens just leave both Swans, so how are you gonna proceed?
2DaYaNa1997Please continue updating, I am confused Carlisle is mature enough to never leave his mate alone like Edward did in New Moon, and its is to cliche to make the Cullens just leave both Swans, so how are you gonna proceed?
6/11/2016 c8 Ayina11
Oh, please update. Ash is a b*tch, but I love her. She needs to talk to Bella. She's so judgemental about BxE relationship.
Oh, please update. Ash is a b*tch, but I love her. She needs to talk to Bella. She's so judgemental about BxE relationship.
5/11/2016 c8 Luana LS
Hello, how are you?
This story is pleasant! Ash is beyond fun, she is vivacious. A wonderful feature for a character to have. I'm loving it!
Hello, how are you?
This story is pleasant! Ash is beyond fun, she is vivacious. A wonderful feature for a character to have. I'm loving it!
4/23/2016 c8 22Bella Marie Whitlock
This plot is great so far! Any chance you are looking for a beta? I noticed you tend to switch between first and third person a lot, sometimes multiple times in the same paragraph even. It would probably help a lot to have someone look over it for you and fix those issues and a few other less noticeable things. Either way, the storyline is great so I definitely hope you will continue it!
22Bella Marie WhitlockThis plot is great so far! Any chance you are looking for a beta? I noticed you tend to switch between first and third person a lot, sometimes multiple times in the same paragraph even. It would probably help a lot to have someone look over it for you and fix those issues and a few other less noticeable things. Either way, the storyline is great so I definitely hope you will continue it!
1/16/2016 c8 Dove
This is a really good story, I love Ash's character and the plot. I like how there is some Bella bashing (or rather, not everyone thinks she is the best thing ever and does no wrong) and I like that Ash is pretty close to Rosalie. I'm also really curious as to what she might be. Keep up the good work c: I look forward to the next chapter.
This is a really good story, I love Ash's character and the plot. I like how there is some Bella bashing (or rather, not everyone thinks she is the best thing ever and does no wrong) and I like that Ash is pretty close to Rosalie. I'm also really curious as to what she might be. Keep up the good work c: I look forward to the next chapter.
1/15/2016 c8 Loki's Aunt
What the hell crawled up Bella's ass? Now that's a twist. It's awesome though, I like it.
What the hell crawled up Bella's ass? Now that's a twist. It's awesome though, I like it.
1/13/2016 c2 IggyBane
I'm sorry her personality is too much for me including the bitchy attitude accompanied with it. But over all a wonderfully written story that keeps me awake and interested, I just wish the character could be more likable. At this point I prefer soppy Bella to be honest, sorry to say or if it isn't what you want to hear. But big and loud isn't always better in some cases. :1 while I wont be progressing any further keep up the good work!
I'm sorry her personality is too much for me including the bitchy attitude accompanied with it. But over all a wonderfully written story that keeps me awake and interested, I just wish the character could be more likable. At this point I prefer soppy Bella to be honest, sorry to say or if it isn't what you want to hear. But big and loud isn't always better in some cases. :1 while I wont be progressing any further keep up the good work!
12/2/2015 c5 Wolff Howl
since Edward said she thinks about penises too much she should imagine him as a female instead to mess with him. :p liking the story.
since Edward said she thinks about penises too much she should imagine him as a female instead to mess with him. :p liking the story.