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2/13/2016 c1 35LittleAmberAmethyst
Oh my goodness, this is intense and scary. The scariest part is that could've actually happened if Mabel was around when they had those magnet guns. You did good with writing the details and how frightened she was. A scary possibility, but still a good story.
10/16/2015 c1 RidleyKraid187
That's... horrible. Thinking about it now, Ford has a metal plate in his Skull, so those guns could EASILY kill him. but the pain... I can just feel Mabel's pain. I wanna scoop her up and assure her everything will be alright, even though I know it won't be... truly awful story, but in the best possible way.
10/15/2015 c1 88FallingNarwhals
Ahh! I like this already! Poor Mabel though.
10/15/2015 c1 14EmeraldTyphoon47
A well-written and plausible scenario. If Mabel had decided to find Dipper and Ford on her own then this may've actually happened. I especially liked Ford's thought at the end. Shows that he really does care about both twins and is taking Stan's concerns seriously. I feel sorry for Mabel though.

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