
6/24/2022 c6
7QuirkCirc
I’m so sorry but I just HAD to let you know that I laughed so hard at your author’s note when you were talked about Herohero’s “sorry overworked ass” XD

I’m so sorry but I just HAD to let you know that I laughed so hard at your author’s note when you were talked about Herohero’s “sorry overworked ass” XD
6/9/2022 c6
7ThatRabidPotato
Given that it's been six years since this was last updated, I doubt you're going to read this, but on the off chance you do, you ARE aware that Herohero created Solution Epsilon, right? She should've reacted at his appearance.

Given that it's been six years since this was last updated, I doubt you're going to read this, but on the off chance you do, you ARE aware that Herohero created Solution Epsilon, right? She should've reacted at his appearance.
3/27/2021 c3 ddone8387
read to chapter 3 and stopped.
this story can be called decent but no more than that. Its thoughtless and uncreative. Herohero's presence changed absolutely nothing. The author didn't even bother to rename Hamsuke, he simply made Herohero name it Hamsuke.
I also noticed a trend; many authors have a curious desire to follow the original flow of events to the point of ridiculousness. Ainz used the mask because he felt it prudent but he could've just as easily not done so. Herohero's a slime, theres no way for it to cover itself up and they would never be as careless as to use their low level illusions. Every single uninspired author tries to give Ainz and co human form one way or another forgetting the reason why that's out of character in the first place.
read to chapter 3 and stopped.
this story can be called decent but no more than that. Its thoughtless and uncreative. Herohero's presence changed absolutely nothing. The author didn't even bother to rename Hamsuke, he simply made Herohero name it Hamsuke.
I also noticed a trend; many authors have a curious desire to follow the original flow of events to the point of ridiculousness. Ainz used the mask because he felt it prudent but he could've just as easily not done so. Herohero's a slime, theres no way for it to cover itself up and they would never be as careless as to use their low level illusions. Every single uninspired author tries to give Ainz and co human form one way or another forgetting the reason why that's out of character in the first place.
1/23/2021 c12 Jess
I love this please write more.
I love this please write more.
8/22/2020 c11
2Masquer Q
I feel it unlikely that Clementine could escape from Naberal. Perhaps that could be passed off as them keeping their disguise. But Momonga and Nabe not using any passive buffs seemed a bit weird. Enfi getting poached inside the small house space seemed even more unlikely. Maybe I'm looking down on Clementine, but she seemed a bit above Gazef in terms of skills. If Momonga truly wished it, he could simply use time stop to essentially rig the game and debuff the hell out of Clementine without anyone's notice. Still a decent read but this one inconsistency didn't sit right with me.

I feel it unlikely that Clementine could escape from Naberal. Perhaps that could be passed off as them keeping their disguise. But Momonga and Nabe not using any passive buffs seemed a bit weird. Enfi getting poached inside the small house space seemed even more unlikely. Maybe I'm looking down on Clementine, but she seemed a bit above Gazef in terms of skills. If Momonga truly wished it, he could simply use time stop to essentially rig the game and debuff the hell out of Clementine without anyone's notice. Still a decent read but this one inconsistency didn't sit right with me.
12/29/2018 c12
5ShadowLDrago
This Momonga is a lot less Lawful Evil than the canon one, which makes sense considering Herohero isn't really evil and he's sort of a Morality Chain to him.

This Momonga is a lot less Lawful Evil than the canon one, which makes sense considering Herohero isn't really evil and he's sort of a Morality Chain to him.