for Girl Meets Campfire12/13/2017 c1 Guest
If you write another story, lucas has sea foam green eyes and maya has grayish blue.
If you write another story, lucas has sea foam green eyes and maya has grayish blue.
10/26/2015 c1 
32Dark-Supernatural-Angel
Oh my! If only that happened in the episode! If only that kiss happened! I really like your extended/altered take on that moment.
Great job!
32Dark-Supernatural-AngelOh my! If only that happened in the episode! If only that kiss happened! I really like your extended/altered take on that moment.
Great job!
10/17/2015 c1 5PunkPinkJesusFreak
I really like this story. As a Lucaya shipper without cable this not being able to see Girl Meets Texas has been driving me absolutely crazy, but this story really warmed my heart. It's very well written in how it molds with the original plot line (I saw the clip on youtube and yelled "KISS" at the screen). The only criticism I would have is just the choice of using cuss words. I know that you don't have that many but it's just that it kinda takes away from the mood of the show in a way that doesn't effect the story. But other than that great work! Keep writing and keep being awesome!
5PunkPinkJesusFreakI really like this story. As a Lucaya shipper without cable this not being able to see Girl Meets Texas has been driving me absolutely crazy, but this story really warmed my heart. It's very well written in how it molds with the original plot line (I saw the clip on youtube and yelled "KISS" at the screen). The only criticism I would have is just the choice of using cuss words. I know that you don't have that many but it's just that it kinda takes away from the mood of the show in a way that doesn't effect the story. But other than that great work! Keep writing and keep being awesome!
10/17/2015 c1 Guest
What happened in part 2, I really need to know the suspense is killing me! Or is this actually what happened please let me know I'm such a big fan of GMW and your a great writer please reply soon...
What happened in part 2, I really need to know the suspense is killing me! Or is this actually what happened please let me know I'm such a big fan of GMW and your a great writer please reply soon...
10/17/2015 c1 Guest
This is great. Ugh I want them to be together so bad but they way they played things out with Riley is the show made everything just weird and awkward. Riley obviously still likes him and Lucas I think still has feelings for her. But I think Lucas also likes maya. Oh my lol
This is great. Ugh I want them to be together so bad but they way they played things out with Riley is the show made everything just weird and awkward. Riley obviously still likes him and Lucas I think still has feelings for her. But I think Lucas also likes maya. Oh my lol
10/17/2015 c1 170James Stryker
Awww, cute Lucaya story. I was planning on writing a Lucaya story that takes place during that episode. :)
170James StrykerAwww, cute Lucaya story. I was planning on writing a Lucaya story that takes place during that episode. :)