
7/26/2018 c6 Guest
love the story, but you definitely need to work on grammar and sentence structure. other than that, I am really enjoying it so far!
love the story, but you definitely need to work on grammar and sentence structure. other than that, I am really enjoying it so far!
7/26/2018 c1 Guest
sounds interesting. I will definitely keep reading
sounds interesting. I will definitely keep reading
2/5/2017 c1 clarice aka pasp
I only have been able to read 4 chapters. I don't mean to be rude, but this story to me is just stupid. Not that i haven't said anything dumb before. Its just too weird and ridiculous.
I only have been able to read 4 chapters. I don't mean to be rude, but this story to me is just stupid. Not that i haven't said anything dumb before. Its just too weird and ridiculous.
1/20/2016 c12
21Spottedfrost7
Finally, after... um... a long time you updated. Thank you! Please update soon!

Finally, after... um... a long time you updated. Thank you! Please update soon!
12/25/2015 c9 story maker
I still love it and when chris came back he has the power of light since Dris is his dark side chris needs the of light to defeat Dris once and for all so anyway please don't stop updating more stories please
I still love it and when chris came back he has the power of light since Dris is his dark side chris needs the of light to defeat Dris once and for all so anyway please don't stop updating more stories please
12/15/2015 c8
6xRainbowAssassin
Short but good in the same time. It will be an Epic if you gave Dris an evil laugh be fore he said Chris was dead.

Short but good in the same time. It will be an Epic if you gave Dris an evil laugh be fore he said Chris was dead.
12/5/2015 c8
18ligersrcool
Love the cliff hanger! And a flashback never hurts, and I love how they found the secret. Can't wait for the next chapter

Love the cliff hanger! And a flashback never hurts, and I love how they found the secret. Can't wait for the next chapter
12/1/2015 c7 story maker
I love it and please don't stop updating this story please
I love it and please don't stop updating this story please
12/1/2015 c7
6xRainbowAssassin
Omg! Were they singing? That would be cool. Or were they just talking dramatically? Well it was good!

Omg! Were they singing? That would be cool. Or were they just talking dramatically? Well it was good!