for We Pretend it's Alright4/13 c3 Guest
The timeline seems off.
The timeline seems off.
11/12/2023 c9 ThunderSphinx
it should be longer than 3 months since Ahsoka left. She left before even the Outer Rim Seiges.
it should be longer than 3 months since Ahsoka left. She left before even the Outer Rim Seiges.
11/21/2020 c15 aridholyelite1
You're missing chapter 13 and chapter 15 is for some reason chapter 16. I'm liking the story so far and I hope you can get it fixed soon.
You're missing chapter 13 and chapter 15 is for some reason chapter 16. I'm liking the story so far and I hope you can get it fixed soon.
11/15/2020 c21 
9SheerwaterPhoenix
Now Obi-Wan and Anakin are BOTH suddenly dads!
Great chapter! I like the Korkie Kenobi theory too. I'm looking forward to Anakin and Obi-Wan talking to each other and trying to resolve their drama.
9SheerwaterPhoenixNow Obi-Wan and Anakin are BOTH suddenly dads!
Great chapter! I like the Korkie Kenobi theory too. I'm looking forward to Anakin and Obi-Wan talking to each other and trying to resolve their drama.
11/15/2020 c21 2littlesky33by
Woo! So glad to have you back! I was getting sad since there was no review! So happy now!
Amazing chapter! Keep it up :)
2littlesky33byWoo! So glad to have you back! I was getting sad since there was no review! So happy now!
Amazing chapter! Keep it up :)
11/14/2020 c21 jbugay501
Great chapter! Rex with the kids and you could eventually do chiss invasion or yuzhan vong when the kids are older
Great chapter! Rex with the kids and you could eventually do chiss invasion or yuzhan vong when the kids are older
11/14/2020 c21 Camidala
Excellent! I also love the Korkie Kenobi fan theory and this is the first fanfiction I read about it!
Thanks!
Excellent! I also love the Korkie Kenobi fan theory and this is the first fanfiction I read about it!
Thanks!
10/26/2020 c21 Jcatswimmom
Please finish this story. I'd love to see where you take it.
Please finish this story. I'd love to see where you take it.
7/29/2020 c18 Guest
There are many issues with this story, as refreshing as it is. Padme just allows Anakin to be tortured in captivity and does nothing to help him? Torturing prisoners is illegal everywhere. And with the way the Republic has been acting and its corruption in this story, Padme and everyone is still working to preserve it? Ahsoka becoming a pirate also makes no sense due to her Jedi upbringing. Obi wan betraying Anakin is just forgiven and the Jedi learn nothing and expel Anakin when he needs them the most? Why would we root for any of these people? And I have to agree with other reviewers-you need a beta reader, the grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes, wrong choice of words-it all takes away from the enjoyment of the fic.
There are many issues with this story, as refreshing as it is. Padme just allows Anakin to be tortured in captivity and does nothing to help him? Torturing prisoners is illegal everywhere. And with the way the Republic has been acting and its corruption in this story, Padme and everyone is still working to preserve it? Ahsoka becoming a pirate also makes no sense due to her Jedi upbringing. Obi wan betraying Anakin is just forgiven and the Jedi learn nothing and expel Anakin when he needs them the most? Why would we root for any of these people? And I have to agree with other reviewers-you need a beta reader, the grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes, wrong choice of words-it all takes away from the enjoyment of the fic.
5/25/2020 c21 22JourneyRocks13
Nice to see an update after all this time. I really enjoyed the addition even though it took me a month to get to read it. Love the story and your writing in general. Real life has to come first but I'm glad you are still here to write as well. Hope to read more soon. Hope you and your family are staying healthy and safe as well.
22JourneyRocks13Nice to see an update after all this time. I really enjoyed the addition even though it took me a month to get to read it. Love the story and your writing in general. Real life has to come first but I'm glad you are still here to write as well. Hope to read more soon. Hope you and your family are staying healthy and safe as well.
5/10/2020 c21 28TheMistyBlackCloud
This chapter exactly makes me wish this was canon. Happiness is sometimes exciting after a long war. Lol
28TheMistyBlackCloudThis chapter exactly makes me wish this was canon. Happiness is sometimes exciting after a long war. Lol
4/26/2020 c21 aigneis
What a great feel good chapter. In Prequel era there is so much angst and drama that some fluffy time is more than welcome. I hope we can see some Clones reunion with Anakin or Anakin's family vs Jedi Masters (let them know that there is no way Anakin would let them take his children!) :-) I can't wait for final chapters.
What a great feel good chapter. In Prequel era there is so much angst and drama that some fluffy time is more than welcome. I hope we can see some Clones reunion with Anakin or Anakin's family vs Jedi Masters (let them know that there is no way Anakin would let them take his children!) :-) I can't wait for final chapters.