for Supernova2/28 c1 Blue-Happens
i've read this fic before, more than once. its well done and high on the favorites list.
i am a big fan.
as a fan, the sun powers, while entertaining, kind of fall directly in the firefist aceadmiral akainu territory.
it doesnt add anything wildly different narratively, even if it does fit the Nika twist better. I think other fics explore what it means to have/improve devil fruit powers in a more satisfying manner than this one.
(there was one that has an OC replace the spring-man bartolomeo guy? it really got in the weeds of what that fruit could 'potentially do' in a fun way. other fics like it, that deep dive more obscure effects scratch my one piece fanfic itch a bit more than this)
tbh tho, no editing required on this story, its great as is. when im done with this re-read im probably going to check out your profile to see other storiesif i remember to do so))
all the luck to ya for whatever you're doing today
i've read this fic before, more than once. its well done and high on the favorites list.
i am a big fan.
as a fan, the sun powers, while entertaining, kind of fall directly in the firefist aceadmiral akainu territory.
it doesnt add anything wildly different narratively, even if it does fit the Nika twist better. I think other fics explore what it means to have/improve devil fruit powers in a more satisfying manner than this one.
(there was one that has an OC replace the spring-man bartolomeo guy? it really got in the weeds of what that fruit could 'potentially do' in a fun way. other fics like it, that deep dive more obscure effects scratch my one piece fanfic itch a bit more than this)
tbh tho, no editing required on this story, its great as is. when im done with this re-read im probably going to check out your profile to see other storiesif i remember to do so))
all the luck to ya for whatever you're doing today
2/18 c1 
1LuminouShadowAlt
How? shouldn't the metals directly vaporise rather than melt? You know since his temperature is as high as sun
1LuminouShadowAltHow? shouldn't the metals directly vaporise rather than melt? You know since his temperature is as high as sun
2/2 c16 Dragonsnow1
I can see Enel's fruit in Nami's hands, that would be intimidating.
His fruit can destroy the world. Enel even sank part of Sky Island.
But the most intimidating thing is the losses of the vice admirals. I think you underestimate the damage you've done. That's a total challenge.
I mean, it's the loss of fear towards the marines.
If a group of rookies can do that, why can't the big guys do it too. That would be the message.
Kid and Law, along with the rest of their generation, might try the same.
Law might even try to kill Vergo or hunt Donflamingo with Kid's help. They didn't want to be left behind by Luffy.
And then there are the Pirate Emperors, Kaido could decide to hunt down the vice admirals. Or make a declaration, that his members must hunt down the vice admirals, if they want to be in his crew.
I can see Enel's fruit in Nami's hands, that would be intimidating.
His fruit can destroy the world. Enel even sank part of Sky Island.
But the most intimidating thing is the losses of the vice admirals. I think you underestimate the damage you've done. That's a total challenge.
I mean, it's the loss of fear towards the marines.
If a group of rookies can do that, why can't the big guys do it too. That would be the message.
Kid and Law, along with the rest of their generation, might try the same.
Law might even try to kill Vergo or hunt Donflamingo with Kid's help. They didn't want to be left behind by Luffy.
And then there are the Pirate Emperors, Kaido could decide to hunt down the vice admirals. Or make a declaration, that his members must hunt down the vice admirals, if they want to be in his crew.
1/7 c5 Guest
Any plans for a fairy tail fanfic? Id love to see your story for it!
Any plans for a fairy tail fanfic? Id love to see your story for it!
12/27/2024 c16 Conner Kumiai
Al fin al dia con esto. Yo no soy muy fan de One Piece, pero ver tanto material de este siendo usado en tus fics casi me obligó a leerlo, y hasta ahora es muy entretenido!
Al fin al dia con esto. Yo no soy muy fan de One Piece, pero ver tanto material de este siendo usado en tus fics casi me obligó a leerlo, y hasta ahora es muy entretenido!
12/27/2024 c14 1TheWateringWizard
One thing I’m a little annoyed about is that Luffy seems to be the only one who hasn’t shown any Haki, which is a little insulting considering that in canon he had all three. You even gave Vivi Conqueror Haki first…
1TheWateringWizardOne thing I’m a little annoyed about is that Luffy seems to be the only one who hasn’t shown any Haki, which is a little insulting considering that in canon he had all three. You even gave Vivi Conqueror Haki first…
12/26/2024 c12 TheWateringWizard
Everyone was so fucking badass ! Vivi and Nami injuring Crocodile like that was so cool
Everyone was so fucking badass ! Vivi and Nami injuring Crocodile like that was so cool
12/26/2024 c11 TheWateringWizard
Oh no… that’s really, really bad…
Great chapter, loved Sanji’s reaction to Luffy having also bagged Vivi!
Oh no… that’s really, really bad…
Great chapter, loved Sanji’s reaction to Luffy having also bagged Vivi!
12/25/2024 c10 TheWateringWizard
Really liked how you added Vivi in the relationship!
And Ace gave them the official introduction to Haki!
Really liked how you added Vivi in the relationship!
And Ace gave them the official introduction to Haki!
12/25/2024 c9 TheWateringWizard
A brilliant chapter ! Loved the new powers some crew members started to develop. Seems like Zoro is starting on observation Haki. I really liked Luffy’s rockets.
Also some brilliant character development for Robin, love it
A brilliant chapter ! Loved the new powers some crew members started to develop. Seems like Zoro is starting on observation Haki. I really liked Luffy’s rockets.
Also some brilliant character development for Robin, love it
12/24/2024 c8 TheWateringWizard
Love seeing how some things are changing due to Luffy's and the crews’ actions
Love seeing how some things are changing due to Luffy's and the crews’ actions
12/23/2024 c7 TheWateringWizard
I love the addition of Valentine to the crew and the early addition if Robin! Can’t wait to read the Alabasta arc. Luffy’s fruit is going to be incredibly overpowered against Crocodile since enough heat can melt sand
I love the addition of Valentine to the crew and the early addition if Robin! Can’t wait to read the Alabasta arc. Luffy’s fruit is going to be incredibly overpowered against Crocodile since enough heat can melt sand
12/22/2024 c5 TheWateringWizard
Brilliant way to deal with Arlong and his pirates ! Nezumi’s beatdown was also very satisfying.
Things got really serious between Luffy and Nami, glad it did.
Brilliant way to deal with Arlong and his pirates ! Nezumi’s beatdown was also very satisfying.
Things got really serious between Luffy and Nami, glad it did.