
12/19/2024 c2
1TheWateringWizard
Great chapter ! I like how you’re building up the Luffy/Nami like that

Great chapter ! I like how you’re building up the Luffy/Nami like that
11/14/2024 c1 hayden515
why did you make vivi awaken her conquers haki when luffy has more will your letting luffys crew surpass him in haki which is stupid
why did you make vivi awaken her conquers haki when luffy has more will your letting luffys crew surpass him in haki which is stupid
11/11/2024 c15 Agent Frank
This was a pretty cool change. I expected Vivi to go with them but the Smoker situation was unexpected. Still, it makes sense and honestly it can lead to you doing something interesting with Tashigi.
This was a pretty cool change. I expected Vivi to go with them but the Smoker situation was unexpected. Still, it makes sense and honestly it can lead to you doing something interesting with Tashigi.
11/4/2024 c6 Tataneke
If they had over a hundred million and luffy said they would get an equal cut why would he just spend 100k in zoros swords it makes no sense
If they had over a hundred million and luffy said they would get an equal cut why would he just spend 100k in zoros swords it makes no sense
10/12/2024 c4 mi6u31an631riv3ra
I have tried to read this story in my free time, I didn't think I would get so hooked on this work.
I find it hard to believe that there are readers who want Kuro on the team, I've never read that in any novel until now.
And it really surprises me that there are people who believe that Don Krieg can't be defeated by the current Nami. A positive point for fanfics is that since there is no clear time step between arcs, the authors can choose the length of the time jump whether in days, weeks or months and as we know Oda uses this to make the muguiwaras train and show power oops like the case of Gear 2 and really Don Krieg's strength is nothing compared to Luffy, Zoro and Sanji from East Blue, his strongest point was being a trickster.
As for the expanded team, this has always been my dream team:
1. Luffy
2. Zoro
3. Nami
4. Sanji
5. Usopp
6. Vivi
7. Chopper
8. Nico Robin
9. Bentham
10. Franky
11. Brook
12. Hancock
13. Carrot
14. Jinbei
15. Yamato
16. Bonney
Thanks for the chapter.
I have tried to read this story in my free time, I didn't think I would get so hooked on this work.
I find it hard to believe that there are readers who want Kuro on the team, I've never read that in any novel until now.
And it really surprises me that there are people who believe that Don Krieg can't be defeated by the current Nami. A positive point for fanfics is that since there is no clear time step between arcs, the authors can choose the length of the time jump whether in days, weeks or months and as we know Oda uses this to make the muguiwaras train and show power oops like the case of Gear 2 and really Don Krieg's strength is nothing compared to Luffy, Zoro and Sanji from East Blue, his strongest point was being a trickster.
As for the expanded team, this has always been my dream team:
1. Luffy
2. Zoro
3. Nami
4. Sanji
5. Usopp
6. Vivi
7. Chopper
8. Nico Robin
9. Bentham
10. Franky
11. Brook
12. Hancock
13. Carrot
14. Jinbei
15. Yamato
16. Bonney
Thanks for the chapter.
10/12/2024 c3 mi6u31an631riv3ra
Wow, that's our god Usopp, this farewell has surpassed that of the manga and the live action hehehe, we all knew that we were going to see a kiss between these two and most likely they will end up together in the original work. And I really thought for a moment that Kaya would join the team, but it's not time yet if the author plans to include her.
I'm glad that Nami's training is really noticeable in this chapter, readers may think her growth is too fast, but I think it's okay. Thanks for the chapter.
Wow, that's our god Usopp, this farewell has surpassed that of the manga and the live action hehehe, we all knew that we were going to see a kiss between these two and most likely they will end up together in the original work. And I really thought for a moment that Kaya would join the team, but it's not time yet if the author plans to include her.
I'm glad that Nami's training is really noticeable in this chapter, readers may think her growth is too fast, but I think it's okay. Thanks for the chapter.
10/12/2024 c2 mi6u31an631riv3ra
Man another incredible chapter hahaha I'm really liking it, for a moment I thought Luffy was going to kill Buggy, but I guess we'll have him for much longer.
I love NamixLuffy's scenes, I wish it had been like that in the original work, I also like that Luffy wants Nami to be stronger, the last chapter of the manga made it clear that several members need to improve, the cowardly trio should no longer exist in the crew of a Younko.
For those who do not know, the invulnerability of the lodges is not automatic. Thanks for the chapter.
Man another incredible chapter hahaha I'm really liking it, for a moment I thought Luffy was going to kill Buggy, but I guess we'll have him for much longer.
I love NamixLuffy's scenes, I wish it had been like that in the original work, I also like that Luffy wants Nami to be stronger, the last chapter of the manga made it clear that several members need to improve, the cowardly trio should no longer exist in the crew of a Younko.
For those who do not know, the invulnerability of the lodges is not automatic. Thanks for the chapter.
10/11/2024 c1 mi6u31an631riv3ra
OMG, I finally think I found the One Piece fanfic I was looking for, I've been visiting all the novel sites looking for a fanfic that could completely capture my attention and interest, this has been a great first chapter, it's almost the same as the original but adding new things at the same time. I love Nami and Luffy's interactions, every time they interact with each other it feels so natural as if they were taken from the same manga and how you wrote Shanks was wonderful, for a long time many fans have believed that Shanks is a saint, but they forget that he is also a pirate who has stained his hands with blood and this has been seen in the last arc of the manga. Now, you could say that I agree with Luffy eliminating some of his enemies, even if this goes against Oda's ideas.
I don't know what date you rewrote this, but I can't believe that you gave a sun fruit to Luffy without knowing about the sun god Nika hahahahaha.
I will follow this work closely until the day it is finished, I will continue reading all the chapters until the last one, maybe I will read them all at once. Thanks for the chapter.
OMG, I finally think I found the One Piece fanfic I was looking for, I've been visiting all the novel sites looking for a fanfic that could completely capture my attention and interest, this has been a great first chapter, it's almost the same as the original but adding new things at the same time. I love Nami and Luffy's interactions, every time they interact with each other it feels so natural as if they were taken from the same manga and how you wrote Shanks was wonderful, for a long time many fans have believed that Shanks is a saint, but they forget that he is also a pirate who has stained his hands with blood and this has been seen in the last arc of the manga. Now, you could say that I agree with Luffy eliminating some of his enemies, even if this goes against Oda's ideas.
I don't know what date you rewrote this, but I can't believe that you gave a sun fruit to Luffy without knowing about the sun god Nika hahahahaha.
I will follow this work closely until the day it is finished, I will continue reading all the chapters until the last one, maybe I will read them all at once. Thanks for the chapter.