
10/8/2024 c16 Nova Aurora
Espero y consigas nuevamente inspiración, está historia es simplemente genial :)
He conseguido pocos fic como este que me gusten tanto
Espero y consigas nuevamente inspiración, está historia es simplemente genial :)
He conseguido pocos fic como este que me gusten tanto
10/4/2024 c1 AnimeGuy93
i absolutely hate fics that keep luffy's cannon personality when he doesn't have the same DF that was the reason for said personality, i also dont like namis canon personality all she does is whine, and hit the crew for no actual reason its so dumb and annoying
i absolutely hate fics that keep luffy's cannon personality when he doesn't have the same DF that was the reason for said personality, i also dont like namis canon personality all she does is whine, and hit the crew for no actual reason its so dumb and annoying
10/2/2024 c3 Sapphire Exorcists
Ngl, the constant mention of "Comical Shark-Tooth Faces" is getting to be a bit much...
Ngl, the constant mention of "Comical Shark-Tooth Faces" is getting to be a bit much...
10/2/2024 c1 Sapphire Exorcists
I haven't read the fiction yet, I just want to correct the commenter below me that tried to correct the author on Robin's age. Robin is 28 before the time Skip and 30 afterwards. So no, the author was not wrong
I haven't read the fiction yet, I just want to correct the commenter below me that tried to correct the author on Robin's age. Robin is 28 before the time Skip and 30 afterwards. So no, the author was not wrong
9/29/2024 c7 Guest
Just so you know when Robin meets Luffy she’s only seven years older than him she’s 24 when she meets the crew and she’s 26 after time skip so she was on the run from the world government for 16 years not twenty but eh close enough(even though it’s about four years off).
Just so you know when Robin meets Luffy she’s only seven years older than him she’s 24 when she meets the crew and she’s 26 after time skip so she was on the run from the world government for 16 years not twenty but eh close enough(even though it’s about four years off).
9/29/2024 c6 Guest
Jibberflex shut up the sun fruit is a great fruit idea. It pretty much give you power superior to any heat type logia including the flame flame fruit the lava lava fruit and lightning fruit cause the sun is one of the hottest things in existence in the one piece verse sunlight lets you travel at light speed letting Luffy keep up with the glint glint fruit admiral can melt aokiji and do a lot of other cool shit. it’s early story and the writer pretty much made this sun fruit up he has to make up attacks and abilities so let him write and think. Author don’t listen to this idiot and the nay sayers you have a great story and I hope to see you update more in the future peace on man.
Jibberflex shut up the sun fruit is a great fruit idea. It pretty much give you power superior to any heat type logia including the flame flame fruit the lava lava fruit and lightning fruit cause the sun is one of the hottest things in existence in the one piece verse sunlight lets you travel at light speed letting Luffy keep up with the glint glint fruit admiral can melt aokiji and do a lot of other cool shit. it’s early story and the writer pretty much made this sun fruit up he has to make up attacks and abilities so let him write and think. Author don’t listen to this idiot and the nay sayers you have a great story and I hope to see you update more in the future peace on man.
10/1/2024 c6 Jibberflex
Bruh, why are you having them blunt every attack when it comes to main characters? Should have just had Zoro slice through the Unluckies instead of made it blunt. They just tried to assassinate someone and he still went easy? Trying to stick to canon too much ruins the story.
Bruh, why are you having them blunt every attack when it comes to main characters? Should have just had Zoro slice through the Unluckies instead of made it blunt. They just tried to assassinate someone and he still went easy? Trying to stick to canon too much ruins the story.
10/1/2024 c6 Jibberflex
Why does he have to yell out the techniques still? He's just letting anyone who knows what they are know he has them.
Why does he have to yell out the techniques still? He's just letting anyone who knows what they are know he has them.
9/22/2024 c16 TenorSax93
Just found this story and binged it. It 100% makes me wanna go back and watch One Piece again lol.
Absolutely fantastic work! Can't wait for the next update!
Just found this story and binged it. It 100% makes me wanna go back and watch One Piece again lol.
Absolutely fantastic work! Can't wait for the next update!
9/14/2024 c16 Sean Malloy-1
Loving this story so far, I'll be looking forward to how you change things in Skypia. I'm also a bit surprised that you haven't posted this story on your AO3 account.
So, Zoro/Tashigi pairing?
Loving this story so far, I'll be looking forward to how you change things in Skypia. I'm also a bit surprised that you haven't posted this story on your AO3 account.
So, Zoro/Tashigi pairing?