for Facebook Friends10/26/2018 c1 Guest
How is this pride and prejudice FanFiction...? Interesting and not poorly written but hardly a nod to the original minus the names (even then, so OOC and you took a LOT of liberties with the relationships). Just make it fictionpress stuff
How is this pride and prejudice FanFiction...? Interesting and not poorly written but hardly a nod to the original minus the names (even then, so OOC and you took a LOT of liberties with the relationships). Just make it fictionpress stuff
1/16/2018 c1 
6Windchimed
This was definitely different. Not very P&P like, but a good romp nevertheless. Thanks for sharing it!
6WindchimedThis was definitely different. Not very P&P like, but a good romp nevertheless. Thanks for sharing it!
7/16/2017 c1 1dead feather
Interesting but how did this connect to p&p. Even the bennets seem to be filthy rich. So while interesting idea, it felt hollow because the names were just stamped on characters that had little to do with p&p
1dead featherInteresting but how did this connect to p&p. Even the bennets seem to be filthy rich. So while interesting idea, it felt hollow because the names were just stamped on characters that had little to do with p&p
1/9/2017 c1 Guest
I love this story especially how you portrayed Jane's character, I think it is much more interesting and lends more to the story than a more docile Jane would have. Could you do a chapter or one shot where the boys meet all of Lizzie's family Charlie, Jane, and Aunt Caroline (especially Aunt Caroline and Jane) I know that the boys have already met Jane but I think it would be very interesting to read about them meeting her and asking her to allow them to court her pseudo daughter. I truly think you are a sensational writer and hope to read even more of your works.
I love this story especially how you portrayed Jane's character, I think it is much more interesting and lends more to the story than a more docile Jane would have. Could you do a chapter or one shot where the boys meet all of Lizzie's family Charlie, Jane, and Aunt Caroline (especially Aunt Caroline and Jane) I know that the boys have already met Jane but I think it would be very interesting to read about them meeting her and asking her to allow them to court her pseudo daughter. I truly think you are a sensational writer and hope to read even more of your works.
11/28/2016 c1 1A love story with ghosts in it
I loved this story! It was really well-written and I didn't get nightmares from thinking about Lizzy with someone else:p There is one thing I don't quite get; Lizzy's family dynamics. I get that she was raised by Jane, Bingley and Caroline, but I don't get her father and why Jane seems to hate him so much.
1A love story with ghosts in itI loved this story! It was really well-written and I didn't get nightmares from thinking about Lizzy with someone else:p There is one thing I don't quite get; Lizzy's family dynamics. I get that she was raised by Jane, Bingley and Caroline, but I don't get her father and why Jane seems to hate him so much.
9/4/2016 c1 jcqaz
Really awesome...great in and out of separate time sequences. The imagery was great. Loved the pairing and how you got there. Thanks for posting. It was a really fun read.
Really awesome...great in and out of separate time sequences. The imagery was great. Loved the pairing and how you got there. Thanks for posting. It was a really fun read.
2/16/2016 c1 MissPhryneFisher
I loved this. I wish you would expand Barefoot and this one, they are both worth it.
I loved this. I wish you would expand Barefoot and this one, they are both worth it.
2/1/2016 c1 48worldtravellingfly
Hi!
I really enjoyed reading this! It was new, it was refreshing, and a wonderful take on the Fitzwilliam/Lizzie/Darcy angle. I especially liked your portrayal of a modern Richard, including the extra glitter! (; It was *glorious* to see BAMF!Jane, who everyone is afraid af of. I think you brilliantly managed to write a story that includes the often forgotten traits of some of the main characters of the original, so chapeau!
Have a great day!
W
48worldtravellingflyHi!
I really enjoyed reading this! It was new, it was refreshing, and a wonderful take on the Fitzwilliam/Lizzie/Darcy angle. I especially liked your portrayal of a modern Richard, including the extra glitter! (; It was *glorious* to see BAMF!Jane, who everyone is afraid af of. I think you brilliantly managed to write a story that includes the often forgotten traits of some of the main characters of the original, so chapeau!
Have a great day!
W
11/6/2015 c1 14LoveLoverGrl
This is new. But I like it.
I can't imagine ever getting one man, let alone two!
14LoveLoverGrlThis is new. But I like it.
I can't imagine ever getting one man, let alone two!