for Facebook Friends11/2/2015 c1 Insiyah786
This was simply great. At the start I was trying to figure out what the hell is going on but then eventually I got it, and the end was just sweet. Jane is epic here - all badass.
You did a great job!
This was simply great. At the start I was trying to figure out what the hell is going on but then eventually I got it, and the end was just sweet. Jane is epic here - all badass.
You did a great job!
10/31/2015 c1 
3Lily Draco
This really isn't the type of story I normally read. That being said, I absolutely loved this. It was written very well. It shows that it doesn't matter how many people, what their genders, or their preferences as long as they have love and respect the relationship is a good one.
3Lily DracoThis really isn't the type of story I normally read. That being said, I absolutely loved this. It was written very well. It shows that it doesn't matter how many people, what their genders, or their preferences as long as they have love and respect the relationship is a good one.
10/27/2015 c1 Lou Darcy
Lets be honest. At first lines I was like ''but WTF is happening here!?'' But in the middle of the story I was relaxing. At the end, I just loved it. It was funny and lovely. I loved Richard, he always is the happy one, isn't he? And Darce... my dear love. He is always the taciturn one but he is the love of my life and I always have, and always will love him despite everything. Poor baby! He was sad when Lizzie ran away from them.
And Lizzie... what I can say? She's the best and actually I envy her.
Great story! I enjoyed it very much! I wish you could write a secuel! That would be great. xo
Lets be honest. At first lines I was like ''but WTF is happening here!?'' But in the middle of the story I was relaxing. At the end, I just loved it. It was funny and lovely. I loved Richard, he always is the happy one, isn't he? And Darce... my dear love. He is always the taciturn one but he is the love of my life and I always have, and always will love him despite everything. Poor baby! He was sad when Lizzie ran away from them.
And Lizzie... what I can say? She's the best and actually I envy her.
Great story! I enjoyed it very much! I wish you could write a secuel! That would be great. xo
10/25/2015 c1 Guest
Thank you, as always your stories are very intense and delightful. Please post Bones soon. The last chapter is consistenly on my mind.
Thank you, as always your stories are very intense and delightful. Please post Bones soon. The last chapter is consistenly on my mind.
10/25/2015 c1 Leanne7859
As always, I love your writing. I get so absorbed in your stories that the next thing I know, I'm finished reading. That's when the crushing realization that it's over comes haha. This one was so different and yet, true to your writing style, it was captivating. I feel like you could write any combination of characters and personalities and I would love it.
Another reviewer apparently finds your writing style exhausting. Personally, I enjoy a more complicated story with deeper characters. I like having to pay attention to what I'm reading and trying to piece things together to predict what will happen. Your stories always come together in the end and clear everything up.
I feel like I also need to comment on the fact that said reviewer who doesn't like your writing style or your characters has read "every story of yours". :)
As always, I love your writing. I get so absorbed in your stories that the next thing I know, I'm finished reading. That's when the crushing realization that it's over comes haha. This one was so different and yet, true to your writing style, it was captivating. I feel like you could write any combination of characters and personalities and I would love it.
Another reviewer apparently finds your writing style exhausting. Personally, I enjoy a more complicated story with deeper characters. I like having to pay attention to what I'm reading and trying to piece things together to predict what will happen. Your stories always come together in the end and clear everything up.
I feel like I also need to comment on the fact that said reviewer who doesn't like your writing style or your characters has read "every story of yours". :)
10/23/2015 c1 10ST-DL
This story is brilliant! I never thought I'd be able to read about Elizabeth with a guy other than Darcy, without having nightmares, but you've done it beautifully. I somehow missed your comment about the threesome so it was a complete surprise for me, and it was awesome! Really, absolutely awesome. You wrote it beautifully.
10ST-DLThis story is brilliant! I never thought I'd be able to read about Elizabeth with a guy other than Darcy, without having nightmares, but you've done it beautifully. I somehow missed your comment about the threesome so it was a complete surprise for me, and it was awesome! Really, absolutely awesome. You wrote it beautifully.
10/22/2015 c1 toomuchkd
Welcome back Teddy, I know it's wishful thinking we would get anything on Bones just yet, I've told you in the past you're a great writer and I have always enjoy your story telling. I started reading and by the time I got the middle I realized what I got myself into, I couldn't stop reading even when I know I should. Love the characters, just not a big fan of the triad relationship and now I can't get the image of Darcy giving head. Gotta find something fluffy to read and get that image out of my head. Thanks a lot my friend and hope England is treating you well.
Welcome back Teddy, I know it's wishful thinking we would get anything on Bones just yet, I've told you in the past you're a great writer and I have always enjoy your story telling. I started reading and by the time I got the middle I realized what I got myself into, I couldn't stop reading even when I know I should. Love the characters, just not a big fan of the triad relationship and now I can't get the image of Darcy giving head. Gotta find something fluffy to read and get that image out of my head. Thanks a lot my friend and hope England is treating you well.
10/22/2015 c1 Sara
A triad story, refreshing new angle to our beloved classic. But god, your writing style is exhausting. You try so very, very hard to be poetic and fail. Every story of yours is so full of melodrama, nobody could stand these people, if they were real. I have to exclude "barefoot", which was a rather funny story and a nice change from your flowery, overly dramatic style.
A triad story, refreshing new angle to our beloved classic. But god, your writing style is exhausting. You try so very, very hard to be poetic and fail. Every story of yours is so full of melodrama, nobody could stand these people, if they were real. I have to exclude "barefoot", which was a rather funny story and a nice change from your flowery, overly dramatic style.
10/22/2015 c1 3Mme Fish
at least darcy and fitz are not related, there's something to feel good about.
the triad thingy? what can i say? i'm old
all i can see it's potential heartbreak down the line
3Mme Fishat least darcy and fitz are not related, there's something to feel good about.
the triad thingy? what can i say? i'm old
all i can see it's potential heartbreak down the line
10/22/2015 c1 LaurieReads
Sorry, my smartphone decided to send the review without asking me if I was ready :P
Anyway, I loved the characterization, scared bunny Lizzy, poor sad Darcy and Richard who was simply adorable! And ice-queen Jane was very funny to read too. I'm honestly sorry to see it's just a one shot, I'd like to read more of it...I hope you'll consider writing a sequel some time in the future. Great job!
Sorry, my smartphone decided to send the review without asking me if I was ready :P
Anyway, I loved the characterization, scared bunny Lizzy, poor sad Darcy and Richard who was simply adorable! And ice-queen Jane was very funny to read too. I'm honestly sorry to see it's just a one shot, I'd like to read more of it...I hope you'll consider writing a sequel some time in the future. Great job!
10/22/2015 c1 LaurieReads
Loved it! I really like your writing style, and the story was amazing! Fr
Loved it! I really like your writing style, and the story was amazing! Fr
10/21/2015 c1 4luxgloriana
I rarely review anything, and prefer to lurk (sorry, sorry...) but I read this story just I was procrastinating some studying I need to do for mid-terms, and I ended up loving this story a lot? I was a little confused by the fragmentary scenes, but it call came together in the end. Anyway, excellent story!
4luxglorianaI rarely review anything, and prefer to lurk (sorry, sorry...) but I read this story just I was procrastinating some studying I need to do for mid-terms, and I ended up loving this story a lot? I was a little confused by the fragmentary scenes, but it call came together in the end. Anyway, excellent story!