
5/10 c69 Guest
Kindly update
Kindly update
4/30 c11 Guest
Pathetic chapter. Bored now.
Pathetic chapter. Bored now.
4/29 c41 ForMyselfInTheFuture
Wordy, pointless, cringe, heavily features OCs, No resolution, dues ex machina, the list of tropes in this are crazy long, the amount of favorites is wild. If you want a story still in the second year at chp 41, and has no repurcussions on his family at all, then this clown fest is for you. Otherwise this is a skip for sure
Wordy, pointless, cringe, heavily features OCs, No resolution, dues ex machina, the list of tropes in this are crazy long, the amount of favorites is wild. If you want a story still in the second year at chp 41, and has no repurcussions on his family at all, then this clown fest is for you. Otherwise this is a skip for sure
4/18 c20
1Topkick502
I assume that the reason that Harry chose drugs as a way of gaining treasure was to better control his ability to be anonymous. Everybody in the drugs pipeline is a criminal and criminals will help you remain anonymous, because that's what they want too. It kind of builds on itself. If he'd chosen being a jewel thief, for instance, the number of criminals that he'd be able to deal with (fences) would be few and most likely already known to police, making his situation more precarious.

I assume that the reason that Harry chose drugs as a way of gaining treasure was to better control his ability to be anonymous. Everybody in the drugs pipeline is a criminal and criminals will help you remain anonymous, because that's what they want too. It kind of builds on itself. If he'd chosen being a jewel thief, for instance, the number of criminals that he'd be able to deal with (fences) would be few and most likely already known to police, making his situation more precarious.
3/31 c34 andreevmix111
I wanted to get into a lot of Harry Potter fanfiction, but for some reason there is so much unnecessary text with water, they seem to be supposed to "show" us what the characters are doing, but it's so much and generally quite useless - there is some kind of action, but I don't really feel the "social" interaction between them. It seems as if the author simply has nothing to say, but he really wants to.
I wanted to get into a lot of Harry Potter fanfiction, but for some reason there is so much unnecessary text with water, they seem to be supposed to "show" us what the characters are doing, but it's so much and generally quite useless - there is some kind of action, but I don't really feel the "social" interaction between them. It seems as if the author simply has nothing to say, but he really wants to.
3/26 c69 1ncarnation
Love the story please keep it up. It can be a little slow at times but it’s so well written I almost don’t mind
Love the story please keep it up. It can be a little slow at times but it’s so well written I almost don’t mind
3/10 c69 London Knight
Thank you for your latest update on your Website : Chapter 88 of The Secrets of The Grey . Please keep more coming and I'm intrigued by all the Black Family Secrets ...
Thank you for your latest update on your Website : Chapter 88 of The Secrets of The Grey . Please keep more coming and I'm intrigued by all the Black Family Secrets ...
2/26 c1 arianamax177
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Your story "Dodging Prison and Stealing Witches - Revenge is Best Served Raw" has the power to captivate, let’s bring it to life!
As a commissioned artist with 4 years of experience, I specialize in turning stories into dynamic visuals, whether it’s a graphic novel, action-packed manga, or a beautifully illustrated webcomic.
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2/22 c1 Mr. MR7
Oh my goodness. I don't know if you still are active on this website but I just ran across this story & see that you are quite serious & prompt with your work. The website is quite nice & the read along on Spotify is also pleasing. Thank you very much, in advance, for writing this.
Oh my goodness. I don't know if you still are active on this website but I just ran across this story & see that you are quite serious & prompt with your work. The website is quite nice & the read along on Spotify is also pleasing. Thank you very much, in advance, for writing this.
2/16 c18 Lewito
so harry is just getting played by Dumbledore again? what is up with the sudden drop on intelligence on the characters? Hermione suddenly is no more help than ron, acting impulsive, that dumbass self-insolation. i swear i like this fic but it really has some disappointing and infuriating moments
so harry is just getting played by Dumbledore again? what is up with the sudden drop on intelligence on the characters? Hermione suddenly is no more help than ron, acting impulsive, that dumbass self-insolation. i swear i like this fic but it really has some disappointing and infuriating moments
2/10 c24 Guest
I find it a little stupid that ginny does chores at all if she is grounder aniway there is not really a point for her to comply whit her parents.
I find it a little stupid that ginny does chores at all if she is grounder aniway there is not really a point for her to comply whit her parents.