for Dodging Prison and Stealing Witches - Revenge is Best Served Raw9/9 c68 GodLovesReading2
I don't want to be that guy but it's been almost ten years since you started the story and we are only on year 2 I know its been more then two years since the start but I dont actually think we will be alive by the end of the story
I don't want to be that guy but it's been almost ten years since you started the story and we are only on year 2 I know its been more then two years since the start but I dont actually think we will be alive by the end of the story
9/4 c8 HeartsGlow
As young as Alex is and what she wants to do and know, she seems to be inherently evil.
As young as Alex is and what she wants to do and know, she seems to be inherently evil.
9/6 c35 RoBrCh
Oh my! When you create a "bad guy" you make them evil. Your AU is not safe and is in fact, frightening. That takes some courage to write.
Oh my! When you create a "bad guy" you make them evil. Your AU is not safe and is in fact, frightening. That takes some courage to write.
9/3 c7 HeartsGlow
I like the story and understand that HARRY would have "grown-up" feelings; however, Ginny, John, Hermione... they are all too young to "be in love" with anyone. Let alone understand just what love is.
I like the story and understand that HARRY would have "grown-up" feelings; however, Ginny, John, Hermione... they are all too young to "be in love" with anyone. Let alone understand just what love is.
9/3 c5 HeartsGlow
Nitpicking now, LOL! Harry is eight. In fifth year, he will be fifteen. That's seven years away, not eight.
Nitpicking now, LOL! Harry is eight. In fifth year, he will be fifteen. That's seven years away, not eight.
9/4 c1 DeathCrawler
someone is posting this story on webnovel calling it harry potter revenge by abraham smith
someone is posting this story on webnovel calling it harry potter revenge by abraham smith
9/4 c28 RoBrCh
Check with a mental health professional - there are several very effective treatments for phobias as well as effective meds to stop the panic involved. With his meditation skills and self-awareness, Harry would be an excellent candidate for those treatments.
Check with a mental health professional - there are several very effective treatments for phobias as well as effective meds to stop the panic involved. With his meditation skills and self-awareness, Harry would be an excellent candidate for those treatments.
9/4 c29 RoBrCh
You are doing a great job increasing tension in the story. Makes it a "page turner." I trust you will manage all the moving parts of the story and not overwhelm your readers.
I also appreciate the depth and development in the characters (especially the 'good guys). Hermione strikes me as a bit too simple (almost one dimensional, gaining all her worth (and sense of rightness in the world) from her academic recognition. I trust you will increase the complexity in that character as you go on.
Finally, thanks for an enjoyable story.
You are doing a great job increasing tension in the story. Makes it a "page turner." I trust you will manage all the moving parts of the story and not overwhelm your readers.
I also appreciate the depth and development in the characters (especially the 'good guys). Hermione strikes me as a bit too simple (almost one dimensional, gaining all her worth (and sense of rightness in the world) from her academic recognition. I trust you will increase the complexity in that character as you go on.
Finally, thanks for an enjoyable story.
8/31 c14 gardenlizard1586
Really cool fic this is.
Really cool fic this is.
8/31 c68 MsCJCortez
I cried a bucket when I saw you'd updated again. I binge read this during the peak of my depression and being half crazy. Thank you for returning to this.
I cried a bucket when I saw you'd updated again. I binge read this during the peak of my depression and being half crazy. Thank you for returning to this.
9/2 c68 SomeGuyFawkes
›› "I concede!"
*pause*, *pause*, *pause*... Nothing! (and violent hilarity ensues)
›› "I concede!"
*pause*, *pause*, *pause*... Nothing! (and violent hilarity ensues)
9/1 c40 
2AvidReader2425
Another highly entertaining chapter, and a really cool boss moment from Harry.
2AvidReader2425Another highly entertaining chapter, and a really cool boss moment from Harry.