for Dodging Prison and Stealing Witches - Revenge is Best Served Raw6/27 c50 Iam Confusion
I don't really understand the deal with the hair colour spell. I wouldn't want anyone to mess with my hair, but I don't understand why the colour of one's underwear is supposed to be some sort of big secret? It's certainly not something I ever experienced as a child. Is this just the magical world being weird or what?
I don't really understand the deal with the hair colour spell. I wouldn't want anyone to mess with my hair, but I don't understand why the colour of one's underwear is supposed to be some sort of big secret? It's certainly not something I ever experienced as a child. Is this just the magical world being weird or what?
6/29 c28 LongbottomSoba
Excellent! You played out Dumbledore's thought process of events we've seen the end result of, where Harry does end up in Azkaban. I love the show don't tell element here, because if we'd been 'told' this, that scene would've been a pain to read. Thank you!
Excellent! You played out Dumbledore's thought process of events we've seen the end result of, where Harry does end up in Azkaban. I love the show don't tell element here, because if we'd been 'told' this, that scene would've been a pain to read. Thank you!
6/27 c49 Guest
Well, at least now Harry and the girls should have no compunctions killing Virgo now that there's no longer a possibility of saving the muggleborn. Somehow I still doubt that they will.
Well, at least now Harry and the girls should have no compunctions killing Virgo now that there's no longer a possibility of saving the muggleborn. Somehow I still doubt that they will.
6/26 c48 Guest
Virgo is taking more and more space in the story. I hope that you subvert my expectations and actually have Ginny off her soon, but I doubt it.
Virgo is taking more and more space in the story. I hope that you subvert my expectations and actually have Ginny off her soon, but I doubt it.
6/26 c45 Guest
There's ageing potions, surely there must be de-ageing potions? Worst case scenario Daphne can just polyjuice into a child in order to ride Hermione's small Unicorn animals form.
There's ageing potions, surely there must be de-ageing potions? Worst case scenario Daphne can just polyjuice into a child in order to ride Hermione's small Unicorn animals form.
6/28 c64 Wulfkin17
Lord Slytherin gonna be walking like a thug with that sword. I just can't see him keeping it on his person and letting it go with his look. Unless the goblins try and have him return it post fight.
Lord Slytherin gonna be walking like a thug with that sword. I just can't see him keeping it on his person and letting it go with his look. Unless the goblins try and have him return it post fight.
6/28 c64 
10Anilime Ahsim
Thank you so so much for updating. I love the story. I love the new chapters. Keep up the good work. I appreciate it.
10Anilime AhsimThank you so so much for updating. I love the story. I love the new chapters. Keep up the good work. I appreciate it.
6/27 c28 1Pont1ac-Band1t
not a fan of these repeated time reverts from different characters perspectives.
i know you have already said tough but you do realise that people are here to read about harry right? how many more chapters of alternative povs are we gonna have? its getting boring now...
rule 1 of writing is dont bore your reader im jusr saying.
1Pont1ac-Band1tnot a fan of these repeated time reverts from different characters perspectives.
i know you have already said tough but you do realise that people are here to read about harry right? how many more chapters of alternative povs are we gonna have? its getting boring now...
rule 1 of writing is dont bore your reader im jusr saying.
6/27 c21 Midoriryu
I've been meaning to mention this for a while, but it's been difficult for me as I don't want to come across as an ass, as you don't deserve it. Moreover I'm a bit late to the party as it were. I'll first say that I think the writing for this story in general is a cut of above most of the drek on this site. The way you portray most of the characters given the circumstances of this story is fantastic and very enjoyable to read. You've set the tone of the story very well, and it keeps me wanting more.
If you've addressed any of the points I make hereafter in your author's notes and I missed it I'm sorry for wasting your time.
One thing I'll quibble with, which I admit I'm sure other people have already done and is thus probably redundant is you setting Dumbledore's and Voldemort's power level versus regular wizards absurdly low. I highly doubt that if a quartet of aurors could take out Voldemort and his inner circle being so weak versus aurors how on Earth could they possibly be able to bring Wizarding Britain to their knees?
My second issue has to do with Dumbledore. I'll admit my personal bias here in that I like his character, warts and all. On the one hand the ritual you've introduced which induces what I understand to be monomania for a set goal makes his behavior in this story more understandable. However the act he would have to commit to complete said ritual is a major mental stumbling block for me.
My last issue is again a personal preference. That being I find it INCREDIBLY jarring when the character PoV keeps changing so often. I think an occasional digression from a primary character to a secondary one can add depth to a story, but the degree you do so is a bit much IMO.
All complaints aside I'm still grateful for you writing and sharing.
I've been meaning to mention this for a while, but it's been difficult for me as I don't want to come across as an ass, as you don't deserve it. Moreover I'm a bit late to the party as it were. I'll first say that I think the writing for this story in general is a cut of above most of the drek on this site. The way you portray most of the characters given the circumstances of this story is fantastic and very enjoyable to read. You've set the tone of the story very well, and it keeps me wanting more.
If you've addressed any of the points I make hereafter in your author's notes and I missed it I'm sorry for wasting your time.
One thing I'll quibble with, which I admit I'm sure other people have already done and is thus probably redundant is you setting Dumbledore's and Voldemort's power level versus regular wizards absurdly low. I highly doubt that if a quartet of aurors could take out Voldemort and his inner circle being so weak versus aurors how on Earth could they possibly be able to bring Wizarding Britain to their knees?
My second issue has to do with Dumbledore. I'll admit my personal bias here in that I like his character, warts and all. On the one hand the ritual you've introduced which induces what I understand to be monomania for a set goal makes his behavior in this story more understandable. However the act he would have to commit to complete said ritual is a major mental stumbling block for me.
My last issue is again a personal preference. That being I find it INCREDIBLY jarring when the character PoV keeps changing so often. I think an occasional digression from a primary character to a secondary one can add depth to a story, but the degree you do so is a bit much IMO.
All complaints aside I'm still grateful for you writing and sharing.
6/24 c30 Guest
If Harry can place down the Fidelius within Hogwarts, why has he not already done so on the room of requirements or the Chamber of Secrets? So as not to alert Voldemort or what?
If Harry can place down the Fidelius within Hogwarts, why has he not already done so on the room of requirements or the Chamber of Secrets? So as not to alert Voldemort or what?