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11/14/2015 c7 5flame55
This is great
11/14/2015 c7 ImmortalMyrddin
Usually I don't like flashbacks in stories but it was really well done, the fast pace kept me going.

Looking forward to the next chapter. )
11/14/2015 c7 RobC
Very good part, this story is shaping up nicely.
11/14/2015 c7 1oghren
Interesting chapter. I was actually expecting Ginny to be consuming love potion already but you definitely caught me off guard with that whole hate potion. Now I'm truly wondering who this sparring partner is though I do have 1or 2 guesses already but let's see if you can surprise me once again. Another thing I'm wondering about is the conversation between the Greengrass family and Harry and his time travel and when Hermione will find out. So please update soon.
11/14/2015 c7 Stormbow
I'm not a Ginny fan for the most part, but I enjoyed the chapter. I could certainly see there at the beginning the sheltered, lonely girl who would so easily fall under the influence of a possessed book. She's not that person anymore. Her mother fall over dead if she realized what her precious daughter has become.
11/14/2015 c7 6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
11/14/2015 c7 vampwalker709
Great chapter thanks for the that harry has ginny

what will he do next should be interesting.
11/14/2015 c7 crankypants16
Really enjoying this story.
11/14/2015 c7 thunder18
Great chapter Update soon
11/14/2015 c7 3desireejones99
Excellent update, though still not a Ginny fan she has moved away from being Fan Girl, just a little Disappointed with the small amount of time spent on Hermione
11/14/2015 c7 Hawkmoon888
And Karma (in the form of Harry) hits John for being a douchbag in his last two tries (even if won't remember the second).

I hope you had them develop some Howler Buster magic/potion/tool to fend of Molly's rants and save their eardrums when Ginny ends up in Slytherin:).

This story is pretty enjoyable. I'm just curious if you will show his other conquests (i think Luna is left at the minimum) or show some of his other preperations.

I almost can't wait for the trainwrech that will be John and Dumbledore trying to work against this Harry. And the confusion when John can't figure out what is happening with all those changes:)
11/14/2015 c7 Guest
Not a bad update
11/14/2015 c7 2zolydck
P.S Well done, What and interesting way to have him secure Ginny's loyalty.

I also love intelligent uses for spells (so well done on that front).

I assume Alexandra black is next? Anyways keep up the great work.
11/14/2015 c7 7bigfan22
Mice chapter. With Ginny and Hermione now loyal to Harry as apposed to John, things are going to be crazy once everyone actually gets to Hogwarts. Can't wait for that to happen. Great job and I hope we get another update soon.
11/14/2015 c7 2Penny is wise
Awesome chapter. Is he training Luna to be her dueling partner?
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