10/30/2015 c4 0DINS0N
Loving this so far! Looking forward to more chapters, hopefully coming out soon.
Loving this so far! Looking forward to more chapters, hopefully coming out soon.
10/30/2015 c4 vampwalker709
Great chapter love the direction this story is going
and great duel not wait to see potters face when his
bill is shot down.
Great chapter love the direction this story is going
and great duel not wait to see potters face when his
bill is shot down.
10/30/2015 c4 2Lanzecki
Damn, that's good! Well plotted so far, and well executed. Good to find another fine writer here on FF. I look forward to how this saga unfolds.
Now to read your other stuff...
Damn, that's good! Well plotted so far, and well executed. Good to find another fine writer here on FF. I look forward to how this saga unfolds.
Now to read your other stuff...
10/30/2015 c1 howmanyisthat
You know, now that I've reread the first chapter, I have to say, it's really well written. You're effectively doing the same things as many cliches' but making fun of them for being less thought out in their reasoning. Makes for a very interesting read.
You know, now that I've reread the first chapter, I have to say, it's really well written. You're effectively doing the same things as many cliches' but making fun of them for being less thought out in their reasoning. Makes for a very interesting read.
10/30/2015 c4 frankieu
nice chapter like how the story is progressing am thinking the ice queen just got option B on a silver platter given to her.
nice chapter like how the story is progressing am thinking the ice queen just got option B on a silver platter given to her.
10/30/2015 c4 2Charles Ceaser
AWESOME CHAPTER. I WAS ALMOST WORRIED THAT YOU WON'T CONTINUE. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
AWESOME CHAPTER. I WAS ALMOST WORRIED THAT YOU WON'T CONTINUE. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.