1/27/2016 c22 ngsie
Now whilst I didn't cry I'm like 99% sure if it weren't 10:40 and me being shattered I mighta had a couple of tears in my eyes but yanoe...
Anyway keep up the good work :)
Now whilst I didn't cry I'm like 99% sure if it weren't 10:40 and me being shattered I mighta had a couple of tears in my eyes but yanoe...
Anyway keep up the good work :)
1/26/2016 c21 Rjme1006
Hey Izzy. This is a great plot for the 4 of them. I think the gossip girl reference here is the part where Annabeth and Reyna went to Paris surrounded with cute bartenders, beautiful place, parties, and dates, just like what happened mostly with Blair and Serena. Please keep on updating this story. I really love it.
Hey Izzy. This is a great plot for the 4 of them. I think the gossip girl reference here is the part where Annabeth and Reyna went to Paris surrounded with cute bartenders, beautiful place, parties, and dates, just like what happened mostly with Blair and Serena. Please keep on updating this story. I really love it.
1/25/2016 c21 Guest
wow this is amazing please update
wow this is amazing please update
1/25/2016 c14 Guest
I like this story, Ima Christian sue me! But I love Ancient Greece and Rome, also.
I like this story, Ima Christian sue me! But I love Ancient Greece and Rome, also.
1/24/2016 c20 Guest
I'm done being polite in sorry your are EVIL I ALMOST CRIED LIKE ANNABETH MATE WHY
I'm done being polite in sorry your are EVIL I ALMOST CRIED LIKE ANNABETH MATE WHY
1/24/2016 c19 Lukuacco
"So, with his proof gone, he only had one choice."
Yes, swearing on Styx. You know, forgetting oaths made on Styx is probably the most common plot hole on this site, it's a bit shame that you fell in it.
Wrongly accused? Make an oath.
Argument caused by misunderstanding? Make an oath.
Want someone to follow the rules? Ask for an oath.
Yeah, I understand that small drama is required, but a skilled writer should never abandon logic for drama. This is hard to fix afterwards and may force you to rethink whole plot and even to edit old chapters, but you are great writer and I've no doubt that you can do it. :) Keeping the plot logical is hard, but worth it.
"So, with his proof gone, he only had one choice."
Yes, swearing on Styx. You know, forgetting oaths made on Styx is probably the most common plot hole on this site, it's a bit shame that you fell in it.
Wrongly accused? Make an oath.
Argument caused by misunderstanding? Make an oath.
Want someone to follow the rules? Ask for an oath.
Yeah, I understand that small drama is required, but a skilled writer should never abandon logic for drama. This is hard to fix afterwards and may force you to rethink whole plot and even to edit old chapters, but you are great writer and I've no doubt that you can do it. :) Keeping the plot logical is hard, but worth it.
1/24/2016 c20 1Asteria daughter of Koios
I can't think...I don't know what to think. Part of me wants to applauded you for being capable into doing this while the other wants to laugh, cry and at the same time curse (not you, rest assured) with many languages as I know which is saying a lot.
I can't think...I don't know what to think. Part of me wants to applauded you for being capable into doing this while the other wants to laugh, cry and at the same time curse (not you, rest assured) with many languages as I know which is saying a lot.
1/23/2016 c19 SourPatch
I'm trying to decide whether or not to be scared of your ideas or impressed.
I'm trying to decide whether or not to be scared of your ideas or impressed.
1/23/2016 c19 2Irwin2000
Welp. That definitely turned lut differently from what I expected. I liked the foreshadowing, keeps the reader in suspense. Keep the great work up.
Welp. That definitely turned lut differently from what I expected. I liked the foreshadowing, keeps the reader in suspense. Keep the great work up.
1/22/2016 c19 Guest
What did just happened?! *flips the table* No, no, no! Poor Percy, Annabeth, and everyone. Is it bad that I kind of feel bad for Camille too? She do look like she had change but idk. I have a feeling that Michael has something to do with what happened. Great chapter! I feel like I'm at the edge of my seat. Not knowing what really happened is killing me XD Keep it up! Have an awesome day, okay? :))
What did just happened?! *flips the table* No, no, no! Poor Percy, Annabeth, and everyone. Is it bad that I kind of feel bad for Camille too? She do look like she had change but idk. I have a feeling that Michael has something to do with what happened. Great chapter! I feel like I'm at the edge of my seat. Not knowing what really happened is killing me XD Keep it up! Have an awesome day, okay? :))