12/28/2015 c3 HaywireEagle
Mmm, had some warning bells when I heard the word feminist. That is not a word I want heard in any college setting. Dangerous word.
The small talk was meh. Thalia is punk at best, not 70's 80's rock and roll.
Mmm, had some warning bells when I heard the word feminist. That is not a word I want heard in any college setting. Dangerous word.
The small talk was meh. Thalia is punk at best, not 70's 80's rock and roll.
12/27/2015 c12 Guest
I LOVE THIS FANFIC! I cannot wait until u post more! So realistic.
I LOVE THIS FANFIC! I cannot wait until u post more! So realistic.
12/27/2015 c4 Gabriella
This fanfic is legit AMAZING! Keep writing!
This fanfic is legit AMAZING! Keep writing!
12/26/2015 c12 jayjay
Hey, I've seen you made Annabeth Reyna's best friend, do you think that you can explore Percy and Jason's friendship as well?
Hey, I've seen you made Annabeth Reyna's best friend, do you think that you can explore Percy and Jason's friendship as well?
12/26/2015 c12 1Asteria daughter of Koios
Is it weird that your story is making me ship Reyna and Michael even if they aren't ending together .
You are a fantastic writer.
I kinda wished there was more in the chapter but take your time,just not that much.
Reyna is so cute when she is whining about being the queen of new rome. And percy's nickname Maca-reyna is creative.
In short cut, I adore your fic.
Is it weird that your story is making me ship Reyna and Michael even if they aren't ending together .
You are a fantastic writer.
I kinda wished there was more in the chapter but take your time,just not that much.
Reyna is so cute when she is whining about being the queen of new rome. And percy's nickname Maca-reyna is creative.
In short cut, I adore your fic.
12/26/2015 c12 Guest
loving the series soooo much definitely feeling the reynabeth. btw cheeky nandos all the way
loving the series soooo much definitely feeling the reynabeth. btw cheeky nandos all the way
12/24/2015 c7 Guest
OMG you are such a good writer
OMG you are such a good writer
12/23/2015 c11 1MyLittleBigBangSwitchAtOlympus
Aw this is cute, but sadly I must say this is one of my least favorite chapters of the story (sorry). I don't know why, but I envision Reynabeth bonding a little differently. Like this seems better suited to Pipabeth friendship, the kind that was developed during the fear bonding chapter in the books. Plus, the whole falling in love statement by Annabeth seemed off, like how in the world would you forget about Percy-unless those extra medicines affected her personality like a lot. I don't know, it just didn't sit well with me. And while I know the tradition of reviews is to complement the author, I'm honoring the idea of the review as an honest way for the readers to tell the writer their opinion of the chapter. In terms of positives though, I'll end this note with the fact that I did like the idea of placing the story in a new place. :)
Aw this is cute, but sadly I must say this is one of my least favorite chapters of the story (sorry). I don't know why, but I envision Reynabeth bonding a little differently. Like this seems better suited to Pipabeth friendship, the kind that was developed during the fear bonding chapter in the books. Plus, the whole falling in love statement by Annabeth seemed off, like how in the world would you forget about Percy-unless those extra medicines affected her personality like a lot. I don't know, it just didn't sit well with me. And while I know the tradition of reviews is to complement the author, I'm honoring the idea of the review as an honest way for the readers to tell the writer their opinion of the chapter. In terms of positives though, I'll end this note with the fact that I did like the idea of placing the story in a new place. :)
12/22/2015 c10 2Irwin2000
A great read, and a great take on college life in New Rome. I think you should involve more demigodly events occuring in the college(swordfighting tournament, some demigods duking it out with powers) because, well, it is (mostly)full of demigods. Great job, don't overwork yourself, keep it upa,
A great read, and a great take on college life in New Rome. I think you should involve more demigodly events occuring in the college(swordfighting tournament, some demigods duking it out with powers) because, well, it is (mostly)full of demigods. Great job, don't overwork yourself, keep it upa,
12/13/2015 c1 Fiona
Hello! I just wanna say that you did good ending in this story. I'm looking forward to reading this story's sequel! Also, mind if I suggest? Add some characters from CHB like the Stoll's, Will, Malcolm(son of Athena) (Piper?!) going to college and is friends with Roman demigods like Dakota in college. Their interactions with each other would be very interesting.
Hello! I just wanna say that you did good ending in this story. I'm looking forward to reading this story's sequel! Also, mind if I suggest? Add some characters from CHB like the Stoll's, Will, Malcolm(son of Athena) (Piper?!) going to college and is friends with Roman demigods like Dakota in college. Their interactions with each other would be very interesting.
12/13/2015 c10 1AzureMoonlight
I really liked this chapter. You know, I'm running out of ways to say this story is amazing. Let's just say, whateverEmpress of Wanderlust" writes is an automatic A. Always
I really liked this chapter. You know, I'm running out of ways to say this story is amazing. Let's just say, whateverEmpress of Wanderlust" writes is an automatic A. Always
12/13/2015 c10 8Wrath of Nyx
For a second, I thought YOU were in college. This is so well written! I sort of feel bad for Camille, seeing as I can sort of get what she's feeling, and how she thought she was right. (Just like Octavian...) Nevertheless, REYNA WAS FRIGGIN AWESOME and I LOVED her badass line, as well as Jason's, "I'm betting on Reyna." I can't wait for the Michael/Reyna/Jason chapters.
~Nyx
For a second, I thought YOU were in college. This is so well written! I sort of feel bad for Camille, seeing as I can sort of get what she's feeling, and how she thought she was right. (Just like Octavian...) Nevertheless, REYNA WAS FRIGGIN AWESOME and I LOVED her badass line, as well as Jason's, "I'm betting on Reyna." I can't wait for the Michael/Reyna/Jason chapters.
~Nyx