2/5/2016 c25 1MyLittleBigBangSwitchAtOlympus
As much as I love Nico, I don't know how cool id be with a OC ship. But after all it's your call. Also, I'm glad that they finally figured it out, and I know it's not the end all be all to Percabeth troubles but it's the road to recovery. But Micheal is a jerk, like he was working on the book while they were dating so unless he rewrote the whole thing after they broke up, the jerk stuff was while they were dating. Ugh
As much as I love Nico, I don't know how cool id be with a OC ship. But after all it's your call. Also, I'm glad that they finally figured it out, and I know it's not the end all be all to Percabeth troubles but it's the road to recovery. But Micheal is a jerk, like he was working on the book while they were dating so unless he rewrote the whole thing after they broke up, the jerk stuff was while they were dating. Ugh
2/5/2016 c25 8Wrath of Nyx
I can't wait for the fluff! As long as that's coming, I'll be okay with the drama. Besides, it's the good kind of drama not the bad.
I can't wait for the fluff! As long as that's coming, I'll be okay with the drama. Besides, it's the good kind of drama not the bad.
2/5/2016 c25 Guest
how long is this gonna be
how long is this gonna be
2/4/2016 c17 AzureMoonlight
Yeah. I'm sorry I've been gone for so long. Forgot to review. ...
Anyway- this applies for all.. Great job. Amazing, like ever. Maybe tone down the drama by a tad, and it'll be perfect. Love it!
Yeah. I'm sorry I've been gone for so long. Forgot to review. ...
Anyway- this applies for all.. Great job. Amazing, like ever. Maybe tone down the drama by a tad, and it'll be perfect. Love it!
2/4/2016 c24 2Irwin2000
Wew Jeyna spark is returning, and things might go back to 'normal'. I like how you shake things up but managed to sort everything out in a logical way, something lacking in a lot of other stories. I will be reading this to the end, and even beyond. Keep it up!
Wew Jeyna spark is returning, and things might go back to 'normal'. I like how you shake things up but managed to sort everything out in a logical way, something lacking in a lot of other stories. I will be reading this to the end, and even beyond. Keep it up!
2/3/2016 c24 Guest
OMG can't wait for next chapter nico and other things have me ecstatic. You might not be the evil one everybody thinks
OMG can't wait for next chapter nico and other things have me ecstatic. You might not be the evil one everybody thinks
2/1/2016 c23 Yolanda
I love how you included so many couples from the book, but you still haven't done anything on Nico and Will yet... So can you try to include them later in the story? Love it so far though!
I love how you included so many couples from the book, but you still haven't done anything on Nico and Will yet... So can you try to include them later in the story? Love it so far though!
1/31/2016 c23 1Asteria daughter of Koios
While I do believe that Michael did care for her, I think that he fell for her facade.
If he did know her then he would have known that she don't do jealous.
it's like Mason Lockwood and Katherine all over again.
Honestly, I have sun burn. My cheeks hurt and I can't see well because of the chlorine in pool water so everything is glowing but I can tell you that I tried my best to read.
and failed miserably.
While I do believe that Michael did care for her, I think that he fell for her facade.
If he did know her then he would have known that she don't do jealous.
it's like Mason Lockwood and Katherine all over again.
Honestly, I have sun burn. My cheeks hurt and I can't see well because of the chlorine in pool water so everything is glowing but I can tell you that I tried my best to read.
and failed miserably.
1/28/2016 c22 2Irwin2000
Whoa whoa whoa things are getting hectic pretty soon, aren't they? I love it! Especially the dual-dream/reality situation, that was a great idea. As much ad I love Percabeth, it holds absolutely no logic to let their relationship goon and I hope you remember this in the future of the series, for the sake of quality. But it's been a great story, keep it up!
Whoa whoa whoa things are getting hectic pretty soon, aren't they? I love it! Especially the dual-dream/reality situation, that was a great idea. As much ad I love Percabeth, it holds absolutely no logic to let their relationship goon and I hope you remember this in the future of the series, for the sake of quality. But it's been a great story, keep it up!
1/27/2016 c22 1MyLittleBigBangSwitchAtOlympus
So it's official then? Percabeth is over? I kept holding onto hope that she still loved him but you had to end it didn't you? You couldn't just make things difficult, no you just had to destroy one of the few good ships out there. No matter, I'm sure you have a plan for adding more drama to the story and it's not my place as a reader to judge you based on literary choices in a story that I willingly chose to read. But it's just like one of those stories where nothing ever goes right for the people that make the right choice. Like its so unfair that Percy gets punished for doing the right thing. Like it scars me personally because I know I would have brought Camille back. I don't know if I would have spent as much time with her but it sucks so much that of all the people involved in this situation, he's the one that has to bear the brunt of the issue. Honestly, with the way you've written the characters, maybe I'd be ok with Percy being Liam Blofis.
So it's official then? Percabeth is over? I kept holding onto hope that she still loved him but you had to end it didn't you? You couldn't just make things difficult, no you just had to destroy one of the few good ships out there. No matter, I'm sure you have a plan for adding more drama to the story and it's not my place as a reader to judge you based on literary choices in a story that I willingly chose to read. But it's just like one of those stories where nothing ever goes right for the people that make the right choice. Like its so unfair that Percy gets punished for doing the right thing. Like it scars me personally because I know I would have brought Camille back. I don't know if I would have spent as much time with her but it sucks so much that of all the people involved in this situation, he's the one that has to bear the brunt of the issue. Honestly, with the way you've written the characters, maybe I'd be ok with Percy being Liam Blofis.