for Tale of the twins2/19/2017 c1 Villie
Please write 4 more chapters! I love this series
Please write 4 more chapters! I love this series
12/21/2015 c1 Guest
Boring and trite, and jus made of fail
Boring and trite, and jus made of fail
10/28/2015 c1 
77QUEENSPELLER67
You have some serious typos, but I like the story and I can't wait to see what you do with it.
77QUEENSPELLER67You have some serious typos, but I like the story and I can't wait to see what you do with it.
10/24/2015 c1 Kai
It's off to an interesting start. I would love to see the relationship between the characters more defined so can't wait to see what happenes next. Also how old are they? I'm not sure if I missed it or not but its good to know the if they're 10 like normal or older. Anyways, good start and good luck!
It's off to an interesting start. I would love to see the relationship between the characters more defined so can't wait to see what happenes next. Also how old are they? I'm not sure if I missed it or not but its good to know the if they're 10 like normal or older. Anyways, good start and good luck!