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If you park downwind of a smell. You get that smell pushed towards you. To avoid a smell you move upwind so the wind is from you to the smell pushing it away from you. Hunters move downwind so their smell doesn’t go towards the animal they’re hunting not so they don’t smell the animal. Ch 11 the bantha stockyards
This is a great story, well thought out and many layered. And smell issues aside well written!
If you park downwind of a smell. You get that smell pushed towards you. To avoid a smell you move upwind so the wind is from you to the smell pushing it away from you. Hunters move downwind so their smell doesn’t go towards the animal they’re hunting not so they don’t smell the animal. Ch 11 the bantha stockyards
This is a great story, well thought out and many layered. And smell issues aside well written!
4/8 c8 Julie Wells Thomas
Ya this is political manovoring I always like the pre empire palpatine stuff he became really stupid after that. Not blaming the writers I that that one on wendu
Ya this is political manovoring I always like the pre empire palpatine stuff he became really stupid after that. Not blaming the writers I that that one on wendu
4/6 c7 Julie Wells Thomas
Nice to see the nessery changes are already taking place but there refusle to igolage the sith as a threat shows there still repeating the same mistakes that doomed the old order in knights of the old republic 2
Nice to see the nessery changes are already taking place but there refusle to igolage the sith as a threat shows there still repeating the same mistakes that doomed the old order in knights of the old republic 2
4/2 c6 Julie Wells Thomas
Ya every thing quo gone says reeks of condescending hubris he’s completely convents of his own infallible any one who disagrees or trays to raise a point are simple and clearly don’t understand the bigger picture like he does and for that reason he’s never listen to any thing he does want to here. And yess this saga really does show all of quick gone and Obie one# worse quality’s intilment indifference an almost phicopathic inability to see other people as any think other then tools or objects and a creepy ass obsesse with a little kid. Well they say get burned and lurn that way Maby this will humble them
Ya every thing quo gone says reeks of condescending hubris he’s completely convents of his own infallible any one who disagrees or trays to raise a point are simple and clearly don’t understand the bigger picture like he does and for that reason he’s never listen to any thing he does want to here. And yess this saga really does show all of quick gone and Obie one# worse quality’s intilment indifference an almost phicopathic inability to see other people as any think other then tools or objects and a creepy ass obsesse with a little kid. Well they say get burned and lurn that way Maby this will humble them
3/29 c5 Julie Wells Thomas
Ya agien we see how mutch more awesome the old version was. they had armys of guys and hit the streets and work with law infocement and local governments. Instead of being bag man for the senate and anyone who nows of the true mandoloan massacre they are bage men hi wander howle long till ramans lurns about that I mean it’s a big thing in dookus past and one of the main reasons he was turning to the dark side before he met Raman if they keep talking about the problem with the Jedi its bound to cume up
Ya agien we see how mutch more awesome the old version was. they had armys of guys and hit the streets and work with law infocement and local governments. Instead of being bag man for the senate and anyone who nows of the true mandoloan massacre they are bage men hi wander howle long till ramans lurns about that I mean it’s a big thing in dookus past and one of the main reasons he was turning to the dark side before he met Raman if they keep talking about the problem with the Jedi its bound to cume up
3/27 c4 Julie Wells Thomas
Shoctee and fisto are definitely better then most but that trade mark jedi hubris is still there people are ignorant and supertishus so we must control what information they can or can’t lurn because we now better. Exploring new thinks is dangerous and makes people bad so don’t lurn just do what jedie say I think we’ve found the route in the ones glories old order
Shoctee and fisto are definitely better then most but that trade mark jedi hubris is still there people are ignorant and supertishus so we must control what information they can or can’t lurn because we now better. Exploring new thinks is dangerous and makes people bad so don’t lurn just do what jedie say I think we’ve found the route in the ones glories old order
3/25 c3 Julie Wells Thomas
Ya that’s typical jedi hubris on display here quite not the guy who told Raman to face his fear of being raped wasn’t the on with 5 daughters was he I really don’t want that to be true but it feels way to well in his character
Ya that’s typical jedi hubris on display here quite not the guy who told Raman to face his fear of being raped wasn’t the on with 5 daughters was he I really don’t want that to be true but it feels way to well in his character
3/23 c2 Julie Wells Thomas
Ya emotions are bad my ass windu the master what ever uses a lightsaber style fuel by his rage and a nother has Seven wife’s plo quoo(love that guy) uses force lighting and yoda didn’t talk in full sentences does the concile just get to play by different rules
Ya emotions are bad my ass windu the master what ever uses a lightsaber style fuel by his rage and a nother has Seven wife’s plo quoo(love that guy) uses force lighting and yoda didn’t talk in full sentences does the concile just get to play by different rules
3/19 c1 Julie Wells Thomas
Ya the modern kefir code and order both suck the old republic version was so mutch better. By the time of the prequels they have banned litteraly do anything that involves going out side the temple and have very little going on to justify all the tax money used to support them. They show to be very calus and uncaring to the now force sensitives. When they took anikan they just a left his mother be hind to suffer and Odyone had no problem poeting the Owen’s in danger by leaving Luke to crow up in a burning sand hell and did apsolutly nothing to help them when they where massacre and it’s kinda of a pattern of behavior when he and anikan came acrossed a village being attacked by pirates in clone wars they where not sympathetic. And then let’s not forget dukus start of darkness the true mandaloran massacre. The jedie knew the senate was sending them to kill innocent people illegally but sent in kill teams who had that no nolage of that fact. Just to cury senate favor they really didn’t ever do anything with and there’s no reason they should value. And absolutely no reason the norm non forcsentive people of the to be funding this order that does nothing for and clearly looks down on them. I don’t even get me started on the clones army and refusing to return wrongly take babys thing
Ya the modern kefir code and order both suck the old republic version was so mutch better. By the time of the prequels they have banned litteraly do anything that involves going out side the temple and have very little going on to justify all the tax money used to support them. They show to be very calus and uncaring to the now force sensitives. When they took anikan they just a left his mother be hind to suffer and Odyone had no problem poeting the Owen’s in danger by leaving Luke to crow up in a burning sand hell and did apsolutly nothing to help them when they where massacre and it’s kinda of a pattern of behavior when he and anikan came acrossed a village being attacked by pirates in clone wars they where not sympathetic. And then let’s not forget dukus start of darkness the true mandaloran massacre. The jedie knew the senate was sending them to kill innocent people illegally but sent in kill teams who had that no nolage of that fact. Just to cury senate favor they really didn’t ever do anything with and there’s no reason they should value. And absolutely no reason the norm non forcsentive people of the to be funding this order that does nothing for and clearly looks down on them. I don’t even get me started on the clones army and refusing to return wrongly take babys thing
2/19 c6 Robbler
Aaand im out.
Even the possibility of a multi Paring disgusts me to no end, especially seeing as Ranma has realised, that when he turns into a girl, he is infact turning into a girl!
That he'd treat someone with such disrespect outside of an Anime setting is just unbelievable to me.
Much luck with this and every other story in the future, ta ta xD
Aaand im out.
Even the possibility of a multi Paring disgusts me to no end, especially seeing as Ranma has realised, that when he turns into a girl, he is infact turning into a girl!
That he'd treat someone with such disrespect outside of an Anime setting is just unbelievable to me.
Much luck with this and every other story in the future, ta ta xD
2/19 c5 Robbler
Hm...
Werther or not Sidious is successful in training Maul in Ranmas ways (and wouldn't it be just a tad too easy if all it took as a bit of pain?), I do believe your trying too hard to rebalance all of this.
The Jedi have a "friendship" with Ranma for now, so the Sith needed a leg up themselves: Spycams.
Only, Jedi in general should feel something off while getting spied on. Now, in a crowd it's impossible to pinpoint whom watches you and even more impossible to make out if said "watcher" means you harm. However, in what amount to your home for a bit of time? Yeah, nope.
Shaak Ti should at least feel... weird.
And that is leaving out Ranma, who should definitely realise their room has been changed far beyond the adding of a TV.
A part of Fantasy and Sci-fi story's is, that you certainly don't need to (and shouldn't) explain everything. But Star Wars and Ranma tend to have "complications" and if you don't point them out, people will assume you took the easy way out.
Have a nice day :D
Hm...
Werther or not Sidious is successful in training Maul in Ranmas ways (and wouldn't it be just a tad too easy if all it took as a bit of pain?), I do believe your trying too hard to rebalance all of this.
The Jedi have a "friendship" with Ranma for now, so the Sith needed a leg up themselves: Spycams.
Only, Jedi in general should feel something off while getting spied on. Now, in a crowd it's impossible to pinpoint whom watches you and even more impossible to make out if said "watcher" means you harm. However, in what amount to your home for a bit of time? Yeah, nope.
Shaak Ti should at least feel... weird.
And that is leaving out Ranma, who should definitely realise their room has been changed far beyond the adding of a TV.
A part of Fantasy and Sci-fi story's is, that you certainly don't need to (and shouldn't) explain everything. But Star Wars and Ranma tend to have "complications" and if you don't point them out, people will assume you took the easy way out.
Have a nice day :D
1/13 c32 Sirki28
thank you for these books ive read most of them by now and enjoyed them a lot though you have permanently turned me off from ever trying to read ranma 1/2 even if i didnt already dislike the art style
thank you for these books ive read most of them by now and enjoyed them a lot though you have permanently turned me off from ever trying to read ranma 1/2 even if i didnt already dislike the art style
1/10 c8 Vash209
the jedi in this chapter are incredibly stupid. maul is literally immune to light sabers. he can just take a hit to land a hit and win. why would they even think they stand a chance.
why is ranma and shaak ti in space? anyone can fly the ship. they should have been on the ground from the start. this chapter was hard to get through because of how terrible this plan was.
the jedi in this chapter are incredibly stupid. maul is literally immune to light sabers. he can just take a hit to land a hit and win. why would they even think they stand a chance.
why is ranma and shaak ti in space? anyone can fly the ship. they should have been on the ground from the start. this chapter was hard to get through because of how terrible this plan was.
11/14/2024 c2 asd
shounen characters in sw or really anything serious is always hard to make. No idea if you can pull it off or not. I've never read ranma, other than in this work. And I can safely say that this isn't for me. The whole gimmick of ranma being a girl and boy and the way the change happens is a bit too childish for me, and I don't see how that would work in a serious world like star wars.
shounen characters in sw or really anything serious is always hard to make. No idea if you can pull it off or not. I've never read ranma, other than in this work. And I can safely say that this isn't for me. The whole gimmick of ranma being a girl and boy and the way the change happens is a bit too childish for me, and I don't see how that would work in a serious world like star wars.
11/14/2024 c1 habba
I haven't read ranma ever, but i have one question. Did he seriously piss him self while asleep and acted like that happened often? I'm not sure this story is for me, I like my mc's strong, not bed wetters
I haven't read ranma ever, but i have one question. Did he seriously piss him self while asleep and acted like that happened often? I'm not sure this story is for me, I like my mc's strong, not bed wetters