for Atmosphere8/11/2017 c1 It's Elle
I started this story in Spanish, but I can't wait a few days or weeks for other chapter. I'm in love with Almosphere. If you'll star other story I'm sure that I'll read it.
I started this story in Spanish, but I can't wait a few days or weeks for other chapter. I'm in love with Almosphere. If you'll star other story I'm sure that I'll read it.
7/24/2017 c15 BellaTesoro
I think Carlisle knows exactly who Bella is and I'm wondering if had something to do with her mother.
I think Carlisle knows exactly who Bella is and I'm wondering if had something to do with her mother.
7/24/2017 c14 BellaTesoro
I'm so glad Edward finally realized Bella's abuse. I can't imagine that the Cullen's would allow Mrs. Pope or others to abuse the help? She needed to be found out.
I'm so glad Edward finally realized Bella's abuse. I can't imagine that the Cullen's would allow Mrs. Pope or others to abuse the help? She needed to be found out.
7/24/2017 c13 BellaTesoro
Why does Bella think she isn't worthy of Prince Edward? Isn't she a princess too? From both sides of the family tree I believe. Good to know she's starting to feel confident about her abilities.
Why does Bella think she isn't worthy of Prince Edward? Isn't she a princess too? From both sides of the family tree I believe. Good to know she's starting to feel confident about her abilities.
7/24/2017 c10 BellaTesoro
I still don't understand why just this secret group know about what Bella is up to. Why not tell Edward and the Cullens?
I still don't understand why just this secret group know about what Bella is up to. Why not tell Edward and the Cullens?
7/24/2017 c8 BellaTesoro
It such a shame that Isa/Bella has had to continue to have her freedoms taken from her. Even in this new position of court entertainer and servant she can't go or do as she pleases, always having to kneel figuratively and literally to others. Why doesn't she just lay out who she is, what she knows and how she can help the coming situation.
I hope she and Edward get together soon.
It such a shame that Isa/Bella has had to continue to have her freedoms taken from her. Even in this new position of court entertainer and servant she can't go or do as she pleases, always having to kneel figuratively and literally to others. Why doesn't she just lay out who she is, what she knows and how she can help the coming situation.
I hope she and Edward get together soon.
7/24/2017 c7 BellaTesoro
Good to see Bella use her power and bravery to help not only herself but others like Claire here.
Good to see Bella use her power and bravery to help not only herself but others like Claire here.
7/23/2017 c6 BellaTesoro
Now I know how Peter managed to get out of the pit. It's sweet that he has a crush on Isa. I'm curious why, when all the Swan's had died off, or even before that, when Isa's mother was alive, why didn't Aro try through marriage to gain Forxia. Is that one of the reasons Aro and his evil wife caged her and finally killed her off because they knew she had ties to Forxia? So they let Isa out alone, to the markets not giving her a name to go by or an explanation of her she is and why she's there, it seems silly to not have planned a cover story for her before she went among the people there. Jessica seemed nice,sounds like she recognizes her from her mother perhaps.
Now I know how Peter managed to get out of the pit. It's sweet that he has a crush on Isa. I'm curious why, when all the Swan's had died off, or even before that, when Isa's mother was alive, why didn't Aro try through marriage to gain Forxia. Is that one of the reasons Aro and his evil wife caged her and finally killed her off because they knew she had ties to Forxia? So they let Isa out alone, to the markets not giving her a name to go by or an explanation of her she is and why she's there, it seems silly to not have planned a cover story for her before she went among the people there. Jessica seemed nice,sounds like she recognizes her from her mother perhaps.
7/23/2017 c5 BellaTesoro
I can understand why Isa would be outraged to find herself chained. You might think they would have reassured her right away why they did this. She's been caged and secluded and doesn't know what's what and everyone around her really aren't very clear. So from what I understand, Aro is wanting a war to rid, I forget the moon or the sun side, anyway he wants to have a nationalistic reign (sound familiar? j/s) lol And Isa and I'm guessing Edward are going to be the ones to bring the two sides together. Alice said she was somehow related to Isa yet she continues to say she and her mother were just childhood friends. I take it that Alice and Jasper and (I knew that young boy was going to come out of that pit, Peter) So Peter got out using his wits and seems to have no scraps or injuries like Isa did. How did he pull that off? What are his gifts? What an imagination you have to create this otherworldly time and place.
I can understand why Isa would be outraged to find herself chained. You might think they would have reassured her right away why they did this. She's been caged and secluded and doesn't know what's what and everyone around her really aren't very clear. So from what I understand, Aro is wanting a war to rid, I forget the moon or the sun side, anyway he wants to have a nationalistic reign (sound familiar? j/s) lol And Isa and I'm guessing Edward are going to be the ones to bring the two sides together. Alice said she was somehow related to Isa yet she continues to say she and her mother were just childhood friends. I take it that Alice and Jasper and (I knew that young boy was going to come out of that pit, Peter) So Peter got out using his wits and seems to have no scraps or injuries like Isa did. How did he pull that off? What are his gifts? What an imagination you have to create this otherworldly time and place.
7/23/2017 c4 BellaTesoro
I wonder why the boy that Isa heard and then went to his "death" was included in last chapter if he wasn't going to have some value to the story. I thought we might see him again for some reason. Guess not. What I'm confused most about is someone being a bird. Are the other characters, Esme, Aro, Jane etc are they part bird or is this only something Isa has? So Isa can absorb another's ability but it can be dangerous to do so. I think maybe honing that skill would help her survive and get that revenge she wants. I'm curious about Lua. I thought perhaps Lua was going to turn out to be Edward but it says Lua is a female. I also would think Lua would be more helpful to Isa as the panther. How big is Isa? Is she human size? Or bird size? If bird size panther Lua could have help her somehow. Anyway that seems to be a moot point, she got out and now has found Jasper so I think she's found help.
I wonder why the boy that Isa heard and then went to his "death" was included in last chapter if he wasn't going to have some value to the story. I thought we might see him again for some reason. Guess not. What I'm confused most about is someone being a bird. Are the other characters, Esme, Aro, Jane etc are they part bird or is this only something Isa has? So Isa can absorb another's ability but it can be dangerous to do so. I think maybe honing that skill would help her survive and get that revenge she wants. I'm curious about Lua. I thought perhaps Lua was going to turn out to be Edward but it says Lua is a female. I also would think Lua would be more helpful to Isa as the panther. How big is Isa? Is she human size? Or bird size? If bird size panther Lua could have help her somehow. Anyway that seems to be a moot point, she got out and now has found Jasper so I think she's found help.
7/23/2017 c3 BellaTesoro
I guess Jane is not the evil sister. She was overheard siding with her mother but apparently she sees the evil of their ways. You might think she'd have been able to help her in another way and time. Perhaps this plan has been well thought out by herself and someone else? I wonder if that young boy died in that pit or did he somehow live? I was thinking if Isa was thrown down the pit she could have flown out of harms way? All the advice Jane gave her was rather confusing, why not just tell her in plain directions what was about to happen.
I guess Jane is not the evil sister. She was overheard siding with her mother but apparently she sees the evil of their ways. You might think she'd have been able to help her in another way and time. Perhaps this plan has been well thought out by herself and someone else? I wonder if that young boy died in that pit or did he somehow live? I was thinking if Isa was thrown down the pit she could have flown out of harms way? All the advice Jane gave her was rather confusing, why not just tell her in plain directions what was about to happen.
7/23/2017 c2 BellaTesoro
I felt badly when Isabelle put the little bird down by saying it was "just" a bird. I can't imagine what Aro is thinking and why he's keeping her in a cage. Can we trust Jane? I think Jane is Isabelle's half sister and the new Queen sounds as evil as Aro. So many questions.
I felt badly when Isabelle put the little bird down by saying it was "just" a bird. I can't imagine what Aro is thinking and why he's keeping her in a cage. Can we trust Jane? I think Jane is Isabelle's half sister and the new Queen sounds as evil as Aro. So many questions.
7/23/2017 c1 BellaTesoro
Very creative fantasy...Bella as a bird? Sounds like this may be weaving a cleaver folktale.
Very creative fantasy...Bella as a bird? Sounds like this may be weaving a cleaver folktale.
7/20/2017 c34 myadryk89
WOW! What an amazing story, this is so different from anything I've read so far. You've created a fantastic world; the powers, the way they look, the places described are epic. So good that I pictured everything as if it were a film, a film that I defenitly would watch.
You have a beautiful imagination. I definitely want to read more of this, I hope inspiration strikes again. I'll be reading anything you write, you're so good.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story with us. You are so talented.
WOW! What an amazing story, this is so different from anything I've read so far. You've created a fantastic world; the powers, the way they look, the places described are epic. So good that I pictured everything as if it were a film, a film that I defenitly would watch.
You have a beautiful imagination. I definitely want to read more of this, I hope inspiration strikes again. I'll be reading anything you write, you're so good.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story with us. You are so talented.