for Atmosphere7/28/2020 c34 readluv
I am blown away by your story! The writing is beautiful and the world building is so creative. Congratulations on this work of art!
I am blown away by your story! The writing is beautiful and the world building is so creative. Congratulations on this work of art!
7/16/2020 c34 cagzclarine
Ca faisait un moment que je n'avais pas lu une histoire aussi originale. J'ai beaucoup aimé l'univers onirique que vous avez créé.
J'ai trouvé que l'histoire avait quelques longueurs, notamment sur la 3ème partie où le dénouement prévisible semble tarder, alors qu'aucun événement particulier ne le justifie (à ce stade, il n'est plus nécessaire de développer la psychologie des personnages et il n'y a pas de péripéties spécifiques expliquant un quelconque contretemps dans l'avancement de l'histoire). La relation entre Bella et Edward apparaît d'ailleurs presque secondaire, perdant l'intensité qu'elle avait au départ.
Hormis cela, j'ai passé un excellent moment à vous lire et me suis régalée de votre fiction. Merci !
Ca faisait un moment que je n'avais pas lu une histoire aussi originale. J'ai beaucoup aimé l'univers onirique que vous avez créé.
J'ai trouvé que l'histoire avait quelques longueurs, notamment sur la 3ème partie où le dénouement prévisible semble tarder, alors qu'aucun événement particulier ne le justifie (à ce stade, il n'est plus nécessaire de développer la psychologie des personnages et il n'y a pas de péripéties spécifiques expliquant un quelconque contretemps dans l'avancement de l'histoire). La relation entre Bella et Edward apparaît d'ailleurs presque secondaire, perdant l'intensité qu'elle avait au départ.
Hormis cela, j'ai passé un excellent moment à vous lire et me suis régalée de votre fiction. Merci !
7/6/2020 c34 Guest
This story is really amazing. I just finished and I want to read it again.
By the way I loved this Edward and this Alec
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
This story is really amazing. I just finished and I want to read it again.
By the way I loved this Edward and this Alec
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
7/5/2020 c28 Guest
This story is amazing. I cant understand Why has so litle reviews.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
This story is amazing. I cant understand Why has so litle reviews.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
6/13/2020 c34 
1AdrienDiamond
This story was so bloody good. I loved reading every word. I’ve read so many ficus over the years, but this is definitely one of my top favorites.
I was a bit upset that you didn’t make the person I thought to be the second guardian, a guardian. And the death of two people(not spoiling anything),but you know who. Regardless though I understand why you chose the guardian. It really worked with the stories plot. And that you bought some people back.
The different languages you created were so original and perfect for the story. I loved the whole concept of your story. I wish it was longer just because I couldn’t stop reading.
Anyways such an amazing story. And anyone reading this comment and have yet to read it. I do suggest you read this masterpiece. You won’t be sorry.
1AdrienDiamondThis story was so bloody good. I loved reading every word. I’ve read so many ficus over the years, but this is definitely one of my top favorites.
I was a bit upset that you didn’t make the person I thought to be the second guardian, a guardian. And the death of two people(not spoiling anything),but you know who. Regardless though I understand why you chose the guardian. It really worked with the stories plot. And that you bought some people back.
The different languages you created were so original and perfect for the story. I loved the whole concept of your story. I wish it was longer just because I couldn’t stop reading.
Anyways such an amazing story. And anyone reading this comment and have yet to read it. I do suggest you read this masterpiece. You won’t be sorry.
3/29/2020 c34 3The Devil In Me
just read the whole story, I couldn't fall asleep at night because of how captivating it is! you are truly a gifted writer, and you have a great talent for writing suspense and plot! I am so happy I opened this fic! thank you for writing it!
3The Devil In Mejust read the whole story, I couldn't fall asleep at night because of how captivating it is! you are truly a gifted writer, and you have a great talent for writing suspense and plot! I am so happy I opened this fic! thank you for writing it!