for Atmosphere12/16/2018 c34 petiteWitch
I simply love this/your story! It is wonderful and I‘m thankful for you sharing it.
I simply love this/your story! It is wonderful and I‘m thankful for you sharing it.
11/4/2018 c34 May Cullen M
Thank you so much to write such amazing story. ¡I really loved it, all of it! I read the spanish translation and I appreciate your willingness to share your work with us. I'm looking forward for read another of your stories. Greetings from Ecuador.
Thank you so much to write such amazing story. ¡I really loved it, all of it! I read the spanish translation and I appreciate your willingness to share your work with us. I'm looking forward for read another of your stories. Greetings from Ecuador.
11/4/2018 c34 May Cullen M
Thank you so much to write such amazing story. ¡I really loved it, all of it! I read the spanish translation and I appreciate your willingness to share your work with us. I'm looking forward for read another of your stories. Greetings from Ecuador.
Thank you so much to write such amazing story. ¡I really loved it, all of it! I read the spanish translation and I appreciate your willingness to share your work with us. I'm looking forward for read another of your stories. Greetings from Ecuador.
10/24/2018 c10 Guest
Will princess Charlotte meet peter? Is edward the other guardian? What is Carlisle role? Where is rose?
Will princess Charlotte meet peter? Is edward the other guardian? What is Carlisle role? Where is rose?
10/23/2018 c2 Guest
What about rose and jasper?
What about rose and jasper?
9/22/2018 c34 Guest
This is a really fantastic, different story. The ralms and the characters were easy to imagine and very colorful. The story was well written and Alec the right decision as guardian, and you are right, it is well-rounded and finished. It left me with this little sadness, you know, like really good stories do when they are over. I thank you so much for sharing!
This is a really fantastic, different story. The ralms and the characters were easy to imagine and very colorful. The story was well written and Alec the right decision as guardian, and you are right, it is well-rounded and finished. It left me with this little sadness, you know, like really good stories do when they are over. I thank you so much for sharing!
9/1/2018 c34 
1dreamthief19
I dont even know where to start with this review. This was incredible. You are a truly talented writer and it was such a pleasure getting to read this story. You created an entire world with such detailed intricacies such as a language, different powers, geographical maps, etc. I'm in awe! It's obvious you put so much thought into this story and it really made the story wonderful to experience. Your world was so easy to visualize and your characters so easy to feel for. I dont even know what else to say. This is the best story I've read in a long time. Thank you so much for sharing this piece of your mind with us.
1dreamthief19I dont even know where to start with this review. This was incredible. You are a truly talented writer and it was such a pleasure getting to read this story. You created an entire world with such detailed intricacies such as a language, different powers, geographical maps, etc. I'm in awe! It's obvious you put so much thought into this story and it really made the story wonderful to experience. Your world was so easy to visualize and your characters so easy to feel for. I dont even know what else to say. This is the best story I've read in a long time. Thank you so much for sharing this piece of your mind with us.
8/9/2018 c34 2Aida215
Thank you so much for allowing the translation of this story to Spanish. I just read the epilogue and wanted to tell you that this is one of my favorite fanfics. You're an amazing writer y really hope to read more of your stories. Greetings from Peru
2Aida215Thank you so much for allowing the translation of this story to Spanish. I just read the epilogue and wanted to tell you that this is one of my favorite fanfics. You're an amazing writer y really hope to read more of your stories. Greetings from Peru
7/29/2018 c34 Monik Oslo009
Thank you so much to write such amazing story. I really loved it, all of it! I read the Spanish translation and I appreciate your willingness to share your work with us. I'm looking forward for read another of your stories. Greetings from Mexico
Thank you so much to write such amazing story. I really loved it, all of it! I read the Spanish translation and I appreciate your willingness to share your work with us. I'm looking forward for read another of your stories. Greetings from Mexico
7/1/2018 c34 NoAccountLurker
I really loved this story! So imaginative and original, wonderfully paced and a joy to read. It will live on, on my read-again list. Thank you for sharing with us!
I really loved this story! So imaginative and original, wonderfully paced and a joy to read. It will live on, on my read-again list. Thank you for sharing with us!
6/24/2018 c24 colormeconfused
I would never forgive Esme. I would tolerate Alice but demote her to acquaintance. Same with Jasper. I would reject Carlisle completely, be wary of Emmett and Rose. Peter I would stay close with (even with the strain I would have with his parents). Like they said - Alice's visions are not always correct and basic human civility would equal giving Bella at least a basic idea that not everything was as it seems. Even them saying 'well if we had told you - you would become evil' is not a full defense. That is them pretty much saying 'we put the world above whatever loyalty we may have to you'. This 'greater good' mentality is not BAD, however it also isn't endearing. Bella owes them nothing. Lol yeah I'm dramatic.
I would never forgive Esme. I would tolerate Alice but demote her to acquaintance. Same with Jasper. I would reject Carlisle completely, be wary of Emmett and Rose. Peter I would stay close with (even with the strain I would have with his parents). Like they said - Alice's visions are not always correct and basic human civility would equal giving Bella at least a basic idea that not everything was as it seems. Even them saying 'well if we had told you - you would become evil' is not a full defense. That is them pretty much saying 'we put the world above whatever loyalty we may have to you'. This 'greater good' mentality is not BAD, however it also isn't endearing. Bella owes them nothing. Lol yeah I'm dramatic.
6/22/2018 c34 Saraya
You are so talented and creative and I truly enjoyed reading this story. The level of skill you possess is remarkable. The way you write is captivating and I can really see this being an actual movie (I already view it as a book). I loved it and thank you for sharing this story with us.
You are so talented and creative and I truly enjoyed reading this story. The level of skill you possess is remarkable. The way you write is captivating and I can really see this being an actual movie (I already view it as a book). I loved it and thank you for sharing this story with us.
6/19/2018 c34 Anony
Read your story in two days and I loved it. The plot was good and very well-built and the world you created was wonderful to fall into.
Keep writing whenever you have the time, I love your writing.
Read your story in two days and I loved it. The plot was good and very well-built and the world you created was wonderful to fall into.
Keep writing whenever you have the time, I love your writing.
6/19/2018 c33 vampiregirl9705
It’s already been a few days since I finished your story and yet I’m still hung up on it. Ahh, I miss this world and I miss your characters. Will probably re-read it soon. Please don’t ever take down this story from here.
It’s already been a few days since I finished your story and yet I’m still hung up on it. Ahh, I miss this world and I miss your characters. Will probably re-read it soon. Please don’t ever take down this story from here.
6/17/2018 c34 vampiregirl9705
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I am so honored and thankful that I was able to find and read your story. It was unbelievably amazing! The world you created sucked me into this universe that I will dearly miss now. As much as I’d say I’d like a sequel, I understand your need to leave this story untouched. It’s perfect in the way you ended it already. I haven’t read anything this good una while! Especially including magical abilities. I will miss this story and the characters so much. I also wish that you could publish this and that it could become a movie but would also be thankful for this story to remain on here. Thank you again so so much for this. I enjoyed it and hope to read more of your works!
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I am so honored and thankful that I was able to find and read your story. It was unbelievably amazing! The world you created sucked me into this universe that I will dearly miss now. As much as I’d say I’d like a sequel, I understand your need to leave this story untouched. It’s perfect in the way you ended it already. I haven’t read anything this good una while! Especially including magical abilities. I will miss this story and the characters so much. I also wish that you could publish this and that it could become a movie but would also be thankful for this story to remain on here. Thank you again so so much for this. I enjoyed it and hope to read more of your works!